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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 464
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Fri May 27, 2005 6:12 pm

Very sexy without being graphic. Romantic without being mushy. Very good!

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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1116
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat May 28, 2005 2:39 am

Sweet and romantic Very Happy smiley face Lovely!
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sun May 29, 2005 10:35 am

I particularly liked that you made a point of this being their first time, and the time that would start a completely new phase of their lives. So much [smut] portrays experienced characters (Haldir particularly), doing what they know well how to do and will do again tomorrow pretty much the same. The newness here was refreshing.
 

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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon May 30, 2005 10:15 am

A delightful drabble, Haldir following his instincts, so natural and full of trust! Beautiful!
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1116
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:21 am

Another beautiful drabble.
Great look into Haldir's thoughts and a nice portrayal of his lucky lady Smile smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 507
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:41 am

Thank you. I am slowly working my way up to a scene in my fiction. I am not good at writing this kind of stuff, so I thought if I work in bits and pieces, I can lace them together later. Thank you for reading.
 
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