Reviews for "A Longer Road"

Sat Nov 22, 2003 4:47 pm

Oh, that was absolutely beautiful. I'm not much of a Hobbit fan, but I do have a soft spot for Sam, and this had me in tears here and there. The characterisation was spot on, too- it's rare, and as such it's much appreciated.

Only comment: there's some small grammar errors here and there which jarr the story, such as "Sam"! It's only a small thing, but it does take away from what otherwise is a downright moving and emotional tale.

Well done you! Very Happy smiley face

Wed Aug 11, 2004 6:27 pm

This story has truly touched my heart - especially Frodo's letter to Sam. I have found myself in a similar situation with my best friend (I'm leaving for college, she's still in high school), and this story was truly helpful for me in ways I can't put into words. A wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it.

Fri Jun 24, 2005 3:00 pm

I just logged on and this was story of the day - so I took a peek and was delightfully pleased I did! This was excellently written, and shows great talent, I only wish I had stumbled across it earlier. Well done, Very Happy smiley face

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