Reviews by LothirielofRohan

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Tue Jan 04, 2005 8:03 am

Hi Nove!

Happy New Year!!! Are you still writing this story?

Lothiriel of Rohan

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Sun Nov 14, 2004 10:17 am

Mae govannen Nove,

I just read chapter 6 and loved it!!!! The intrigue of Willa coming to the Eomer pregnant claiming Eomer is the father of her unborn child and the heir to the throne of Rohan. The question being is Eomer really the father? Great plot!

Wonderful character development. I forgot about Isolde as the one betrothed to Theodred. Did she appear in an earlier part of your book? I forgot.

Ani is such a strong woman. Love to read about her as she deals with this new development in their lives.

Thank you for the chapter...looking forward to many more..

Lothiriel of Rohan Wave smiley face

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Wed Aug 04, 2004 8:39 am

Dear Nove,

Sorry about your wrist. Hope you feel better soon. Be well.

Lothiriel Surprised smiley face

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Wed Jul 21, 2004 10:55 pm

Mae Govannen Nove,

Great to have you back! Hope you, your husband and your children had a wonderful vacation. Smile smiley face

Just wanted to let you know there is no other writer other than you who has the ability and writes with as beautiful prose as you do. I have been trying to find other Lothiriel/Eomer stories on the internet and no one who compares to you. Believe me...I have looked. Laughing smiley face

As for me I am going through Trust To Love withdrawal symptoms over here...don't know how your other fans are doing...may be going through the same thing! Very Happy smiley face

I miss reading about my love, Eomer. Looking forward to your next chapter with great anticipation! Very Happy smiley face

Lothiriel of Rohan

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Tue Jul 20, 2004 10:00 am

Mae Govannen Nove,

As you know I have love to read stories of Eomer and Lothiriel. In pursuit of that I have searched all over the internet to find some good stories. In all my searches I have not found the level of excellence which you portray in your story here, Trust To Hope. The quality of your writing is beyond reproach. Your characters so real.

We just need more....LOL! Hope to see a new update VERY soon. (hint! hint!.. Wink smiley face

) Namarie.

Lothiriel of Rohan

By Previous Arrangement · Fri Jul 16, 2004 5:14 pm

I just read your first chapter. I like your story. In chapter 1 the only thing I noticed is that you had Eomer and Lothiriel's fathers meeting about their betrothal several times as they were growing up the last time not being very many years before the wedding. Eomer was born in 2991 and his father, Eomund, Third Marshal of the Mark, was killed by orcs in 3002. That means Eomer would have been 11 when he and Eowyn went to live with Theoden in Edoras. Eomer and Lothiriel did not get married until 3020 when he was 29 and she was 21. It might be best to write that Theoden met with the Prince of Dol Amroth after Eomund died rather than Eomer's father who was long deceased....particularly when a lot of people who will be reading your story will be those people who have read Tolkein. Very Happy smiley face

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Wed Jul 14, 2004 1:55 pm

P.S. Oh please have some of the chapters go to an "R" rating.....please! please! please! Very Happy smiley face

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Wed Jul 14, 2004 1:38 pm

Suilad Nove,

Well I almost missed this. I did not know you had added a chapter to book two. I had an author alert on this story but I guess it expired after you finished book one. Sad smiley face

Anyway it is wonderful that you are beginning again!

I knew there had to be an issue with the differences in the customs of Rohan and Gondor which prevented Eomer from treating the evening of their wedding in Gondor as their "wedding night". How clever of you! Considering Eomer has been wanting to ravish Lothiriel's body for such a long time prior to the wedding, I cannot decide if his control on this night is a point of honor or just being an idiot! LOL! Hasn't there been a theme introduced where "propriety is overrated"...ah yes...but that was Cam and Lothiriel, not Eomer. Oh well... Very Happy smiley face

Lothiriel must be ready to tackle Eomer about now. She is not necessarily known for her patience...LOL!

Truly enjoyed your prologue and am looking forward to more chapters.... a lot more! Wink smiley face

By the way, I think you may have left out a word in the last paragraph of this chapter...I think you may have meant to say "she stomped"....something like that...I don't have the chapter in front of me. You might want to check it out.

Hannon le for starting up again so soon. Love this story.

Lothiriel of Rohan

Trust To Hope · Mon Jul 12, 2004 5:53 pm

P.S. I loved the way Eomer decked Fenwich in Chapter 19! Smile smiley face

Lothiriel of Rohan

Trust To Hope · Sun Jul 11, 2004 8:27 pm

Suilad Nove,

By the way, my last comments above were about chapter 17. Upon reflection I find it such a contrast that as brave, courageous, independent and head-strong as Lothiriel is to leave Dol Amroth on her own, run away and take on a regiment of Orcs to then now allow herself to be caught up and overwhelmed with her duty to marry Fenwick. It just seems a little out of character given the way you have described...still the plot makes for a great story!

I re-read chpater 19. So romantic for Eomer and Lothiriel to have their eyes locked on each other as they dance. Great to read the coming together of these friends, Eowyn, Faramir, Legolas, Gimli and Eomer after they have been through so much together. The teasing and ribbing they do to Eomer is priceless!

Faramir's comment to Eowyn is priceless: "Your brother is in serious trouble if he has let that little hoyden steal his heart." Also, Amrothos' conversation with Cam "He's the one!" and later his thought "This could be interesting" foretells his involvement as the plot thickens...

Faramir's conversation with Eomer was interesting...the things these men share...attraction to the same kind of women:

“Dare you speak to me of stubborn women? Look beside you, Prince of Ithilien,” [Eomer] said, gesturing toward his sister. “This woman took down the Witch King of Angmar.”... Faramir chuckled. “Yes, but I feel it only fair to warn you. Ani would have backed down Sauron himself but for the bad luck of having three overprotective older brothers in lieu of one.”

“I have seen what she is capable of, Faramir, and I do not fear her.”

“Then you have not seen all she is capable of,” the Prince of Ithilien muttered softly".

You lost me a little on the conversation between Legolas and Lothiriel when they were dancing:

“Lothíriel. Na eneth vain,” he said.

“Hannon le,” she responded, smiling broadly.

“Ceni henia thyrin Eldarin,” he commented, seemingly not surprised.

The princess shrugged. “I had very thorough tutors,” she commented. “Did he really tie you up?” The Elf asked, his expression incredulous. Anhuil laughed out loud as the song ended. “Hannon le, brenníl nín,” he said with a deep bow.“Glassen, hiril Eldar,”

It is hard to write in this preview format. Of course I understood the hannon le. But what did "Na eneth vain" mean. Then I think Legolas said "I see you know elvish" or something like that. Brennil nin...that means "my lady" right?

Still learning elvish...Great chapter as always.

Lothiriel of Rohan

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