Reviews by picara

Interrupted Journeys: Journeys Out of Grief · Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:43 pm

Poor everyone in this part of the story! Poor Thranduil and Galithil and Dolgailon trying to deal with the death of Aradunnon. Poor Lindomiel dealing with the loss of her friend. But also poor Legolas. He really wants to do the right thing too. I especially felt for him in this chapter when they are talking about inheriting positions and Legolas thinks about what it would be like if Thranduil had died instead of his brother. That had to be a tough realization. But he is headed for so much trouble! Great to see you posting again.

Interrupted Journeys: Journeys in Mirkwood · Mon Apr 06, 2009 7:24 am

Sorry I haven't been reviewing for a while. This is a great story. You've done a great job keeping the tension up and weaving in all the plots. I can hardly wait to find out who lives and dies (cause, surely someone is going to get whacked here) and find out who the spy is (I bet I know, and I'm so glad) and find out what the conspirators are up to. So much action. Love it!

Interrupted Journeys: Part Four--Journeys of Discovery · Mon Apr 02, 2007 1:11 pm

Glad you are back! I'm still enjoying it!

Ballistics and Bowstrings · Mon Apr 02, 2007 1:03 pm

I also really appreciate the reminder because the "Fire!" thing drives me nuts as well. And I think this is fine as a short essay.

Dawn of a New Age: First Age · Mon Nov 07, 2005 10:34 am

This is great. The povs of Thingol and Oropher in the two parts of the battle were great. I especially liked Oropher's reaction to his first close up kill. And I liked the creation of the Girdle and their first glance at the rising of the moon. Great job. Hope you continue soon.

Similitude · Thu Aug 11, 2005 8:01 am

I liked this. I alwys like stories where Maglor gets another chance. I think, of the seven, he was certainly the one most deserving of forgiveness. Great story.

Cierre, Min Heorte (Turn, My Heart) · Tue Aug 09, 2005 6:39 am

These are amazing drabbles. I really like the idea of piecing together this history with these important moments like this--very touching. And the poem was very moving also.

Interrupted Journeys: Part Four--Journeys of Discovery · Tue Aug 09, 2005 6:37 am

Glad to see you are back to posting this. Legolas and his cousins are very cute--very different personalities and a good mix of them. You did a good job showing that. I liked Legolas's curiosity--it does seem fitting given canon-Legolas. And I loved the exploration of the trunk and the history of the things in it. And of course Thranduil as a good father. Looking forward to seeing more elfling adventures as they grow up.

Lavender's Lessons · Mon Aug 01, 2005 12:12 pm

I like it--it is both well written and fun. And I sure would like Legolas to teach me to *ahem* use a bow and arrow. I'll be looking forward to more of this. Smile smiley face

Grey Havens · Tue Jun 21, 2005 7:26 am

I just was reading this whole thing together now that it's finished and I realized that I never reviewed it even once. Sorry about that! I loved this story. I loved the explanantion of why Cirdan and Gil-galad do not appear to have loves in Middle Earth, I loved the characterization of both those characters and I loved the writing, as usual. Great description and dialogue both!

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