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Trust To Hope (PG-13)
by Novedhelion.
Chapters [36]
Reviews [302]
Warnings [Not much to speak of, except your usual sappy roma]
Thu Mar 04, 2004 6:35 pm
This is a lovely story, and I adore your portrayals of Eomer and Lothiriel! Please update quickly--you cut off right at the part I've been waiting for most impatiently!

Anyway, there was one little thing I wanted to ask you about: I was doing some re-reading, and I noticed that in Chapter 7 (I think it's Chapter 7) when Eomer and Lothiriel sing to each other that the translation of Ani's song doesn't match up. In the Sindarin version, there're 5 lines in the first verse, and in the English version there are 6. I realize this sounds nit-picky, but I love the song and I was just trying to match up the lines with what little I know of Sindarin. Sorry if I'm wrong, but I was just wondering if you missed a line in there.

Thank you again for such a wonderful story, and please update soon!