Reviews by Spydot

Bound by Duty · Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:59 pm

I'm so nervous for Lothiriel after reading this chapter. You did a beautiful job conveying her anxiety. The 'don't look at it' part was just hilarious and it was a great touch. It must be just incredibly difficult for her to look at that bed and think of spending the rest of her life sleeping in it. This is such a foreign concept to us modern girls but you really make it accesible and I can totally relate to her. I love her little signs of courage and how she bolsters herself up. Amazing chapter!

Yours to command · Sat Oct 21, 2006 12:37 pm

I found myself laughing and grinning at my computer like an idiot during this chapter. The fight over gallant Galador was hilarious. The pony reminded me off a mouse my parents caught when I was a child and I made them drive out to the country with me so I could release it. As an adult now I probably would have argued to destroy the poor pack horse but I completely understand that Lothiriel doesn't feel useless and she doesn't believe Galador to be useless either...even if he actually is. Speaking of which, my love of Eomer now knows no bounds. It was a great impulse for him to take the horse and it was just adorable. This is a very original story and I'm just loving it.

Bound by Duty · Sun Oct 15, 2006 11:35 am

What a great wedding. My goodness, at least it wasn't ordinary!

I loved this line, "I could not put it off much longer: marriage was creeping up on me" -- really in character with the Lothiriel you've created. Lovely chapter, can't wait for the wedding night!

Yours to command · Fri Oct 13, 2006 1:28 pm

I don't think it's possible for me to love Lothiriel more! Your descriptions of how she deals with her condition are amazing and very interesting. Eomer is very sweet, trying to stick up for her to her father. Beautiful chapter as always Smile smiley face

Yours to command · Sat Oct 07, 2006 7:40 pm

My goodness, some people guessed! Wow, I'm not that clever; I totally didn't see it coming at all. Intrigued as always, can't wait to read more.

Bound by Duty · Fri Oct 06, 2006 11:59 pm

He brought her his mother's desk....awwwwww. You totally rocked this chapter. This seemed like the perfect push Lothiriel needed to decide that she wants to be a good wife and queen. And I love that Eomer looked like a waterfall had fallen on him....so awesome. Can't wait til the wedding!

Yours to command · Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:28 pm

I love this version of Lothiriel. She is very unique! I'm sure their first meeting will be quite the spectacle.

Bound by Duty · Sat Sep 30, 2006 11:20 pm

Yay! Chapter 4! It was great to see the tender side of Eomer. Awww, he spoils his dog. I love the description of his voice, so full and manly...very hot. Most of all, I'm very excited because we get to see the wedding soon, and then...the much anticipated wedding night. It's got to be tough on her. Eomer seems very nice so far, but she still doesn't really know him, and that's a lot of pressure to put on a girl. This is what makes my heart break just a little at the end of this chapter when she wishes for her mother to hold her hand. Poor Lothiriel, in a strange land, on her own. Then again, I can't feel too sorry for her because, let's face it, Eomer is pretty hot stuff. Looking forward to the next chapter Smile smiley face

Yours to command · Thu Sep 28, 2006 12:11 pm

It was a very pleasant surprise to see a new story from you this morning. I am very intrigued about this version of Lothiriel and can't wait to get to meet her in later chapters. This was a very promising start, can't wait to see how it developes.

Bound by Duty · Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:42 am

Just read chapter 3. I must say that I love blunt Lothiriel. The banter between her and Eomer is hugely entertaining. It was great to get to meet Leod, that couple is so cute and in love; they definitely brought a smile to my face. As always, can't wait til the next chapter. This story is progressing so well and has a great tone and pace.

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