i think this story is a little too true to the book. normally i like to see fanfics with a little more originality. the character Gwenneth sounds interesting and i would love to learn more about her. just a hint- it's easier to pick one character's story (ie- Eowyn and Gwennath) and run with it instead of trying to do what the movie does.
Having said that I think the story is an enjoyable read and i would like to see you update soon.