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Waiting (PG-13)
by Lilan.

Chapters [6]
Reviews [5]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 11:18 am

This was such a sweet, touching story. There was angst, but there was joy and humour as well. The ending had me in tears, but good ones, not bad. Great job.
 
 
Little one (G)
by Lilan.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [9]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:38 am

Didn't get me! I was thinking all along that it was Faramir. That was so sweet and tender. It reminds me of what my husband would do when I was pregnant with our son. I loved this little glimpse into a young families life.
 
 
Cold (G)
by Lilan.

Chapters [3]
Reviews [7]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:24 am

This was so sweet. Not many stories make me teary, and leave me happy at the same time (especially since I hate being teary) but your story accomplished it. I'll probably keep coming back to this one. it's definitely worth being choked up over. And I do have to say that the paabout the "lettuce" robe had me ROFL. Great story, overall!
 
 
Rulers And Rules (G)
by Lilan.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:59 am

I really enjoyed this. Faramir panicking over being late, and then the conversation with the boy.......Gotta love it. I have to agree with Rohanion. I'd love to see more!
 
 
On An Elfling Discovering the "Difference" (G)
by Emmess.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [11]
Warnings [none]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 9:38 am

Oh, my goodness!ROFL smiley face That had me laughing so hard. I can just see it happening. I'm so glad that I had a little brother, and found out that there was a difference between boys and girls before I was old enough to wonder. Excellent job. Great idea. That is going to have me laughing all day. Heaven forbid I ever have something like that happen with my son. Laughing smiley face
 
 
Aftermath (NC-17)
by SpaceWeavil.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [15]
Warnings [Sexual content]
Thu Jun 30, 2005 8:31 am

It looks like everything that can be said, has been said already. I'll only add a little. It was all so real. You didn't write about characters, you wrote about people. Real living beings who are as imperfect and fallible as reality makes them. Wonderful job, wonderful writing. This piece was truly touching.
 
 
I Will Catch You (PG-13)
by kika988.

Chapters [25]
Reviews [31]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 8:32 pm

Wow! i just ran accross this, and all I can say is What A Story!!!!!! The whole thing was absolutely amazing, and you did an incredible job with the first-person style of writing! This is a story that I know I'll keep coming back to. The characters were so real! I swear I was experiencing everything right along with Mara. Great job!!!!! Respekt smiley face
 
 
Priceless Treasure (G)
by isilelensar.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [none]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 10:25 am

That was sweet. Faramir's memories, and him being able to almost feel his mothers arms around him again was all so tender. This was a really good read.
 
 
To Catch an Orc (R)
by Malinorne.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 10:20 am

A most unusual choice of subject. But very ionteresting and very well written. I liked how you showed the different thought processes of orc vs. elf. Rumil thinking that the she-orc was cooking the fish and then cleaning the stone when she was trying to lure him down from the tree with food and flowers was simply priceless. Laughing smiley face I really enjoyed this story.
 
 
The Fall of Night (PG)
by CinnamonGrrl.

Chapters [3]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [none]
Wed Jun 29, 2005 9:17 am

This is very intriguing, very well written and very amusing. Looking forward to seeing who wins the wager and what comes of Lalaith's infatuation for Rumil. This is going on my watch list, and I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.