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Taming the Wildflower (R)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [sexual situations; adult themes]
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Fri Jul 11, 2008 2:02 am
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I do marvel at the intensity of this story. It seems vibrating and grips the reader from the very first line. I like how you've portrayed the Feanorians and conveyed the interactions between them. A bit of foreshadowing had me catch my breath. Celegorm + Doriath... oh dear  Nice idea with the Silmaril as a jewel that should adorn the bride's beauty.
Wondefully done! I'm looking forward to reading more. |
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The Maegd Feorran (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
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Thu Jul 10, 2008 2:46 pm
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Excellently done, Nancy! I love how Tortgyd poses the simpliest questions, as this one: "To be a greater lord in a lesser place, or a lesser lord in a greater place?", even though she already knows some answers. She is very mature, but she still remains a young girl, not entirely sure of what awaits her.
Great job! Thanks a lot for sharing.  |
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Batty Does Barad-dûr (R)
by eiranae.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 6] Warnings [Implied smut]
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Thu Jul 10, 2008 12:33 pm
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Excellent! LOL! She is a determined woman, errrrm vampire  Very funny and suggestive. Great job! |
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Taming the Wildflower (R)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [ 15] Warnings [sexual situations; adult themes]
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Tue Jul 08, 2008 3:56 pm
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| Oh, this is so good! So intense and rich, and flows like a wave, sneaking away and teasing, then crashing back! Color me hooked |
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The Fire Within (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Adult stuff.]
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Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:02 am
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I'm so glad to see your story posted I was sure I would read a gripping tale. This reminds me of your "Nights in Rohan" saga, because once again you made me feel as if I knew the characters for a long time before the story began. Your ability to bring them to life with excellence always leaves me in awe and wanting to read more and more. Your Feanor is honest and straightforward; Nerdanel -- quieter and thoughtful, and passionate. And I love Mahtan here
Wonderful challenge entry and very enjoyable read, my dear Neu. I'll be watching this. Thank you very much for sharing. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:14 pm |
Your ability to bring them to life with excellence always leaves me in awe and wanting to read more and more.<-- *Blush.*
Thank you very much for sharing.<-- Thank you so very much for always being encouraging and helpful. |
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My Anchor (G)
by LadyBluejay.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [none]
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Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:01 am
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| Very beautifully written. Thank you a lot for sharing. I enjoyed reading your story very much |
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Engaged in Sport (G)
by PippinIonad.
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Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:14 am
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| Ha! Very enjoyable and very vivdly written The first line is priceless, IMO. A well done response to the challenge. Thank you |
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Êl-galad Êl-celair (G)
by eiranae.
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Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:37 am
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| This is such an adorable, warm and insightful story, Eira I really enjoyed it, and I will echo your previous reviewers by saying that you've done a fabulous job portraying the characters here. It's such a brief, small scene and yet it says so much. Brava! Lovely ficlet and a great response to the challenge Thank you! |
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Heart's Cord (PG)
by Sulriel.
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Fri Jul 04, 2008 3:58 am
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Finely crafted short story and captivating from the very beginning. I really like the way in which you've conveyed Andwise's uncertainty, nervousness and fear of another failure as well as his hope of living up to the appointed task this time. I adore all the 'hobbity' details and references to his family, home and food Above all else I love the aura of mystery in this tale.
Great job! Thank you |
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Paradox of the Fourth Age (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [ 118] Warnings [character death, graphic battle scenes, sex]
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:52 pm
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I will miss the flashbacks, you know, but I understand your decision Now that Laureanna and Elrohir are married, and reunited after the war, I am really curious just how you will have her explain to him where exactly she came from. He already got suspicious and angry, and she must keep her secrets, and now it's way harder to keep them, isn't it? As for Glorfindel, poor elf. I do hope he's going to find some peace at last, but I kind of feel you still have a few surprises for him up in your sleeve.
I love Gimli in this chapter. He's such a jovial companion, full of mirth.
Lovely read, as always. Thanks a lot for updating |
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