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Paradise Lost (PG)
by elea24.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [Angst]
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:20 pm
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Wow! This was thrilling!
I think you've captured the tragedy of Miriel perfectly in this short story: her happier past when she was young, and then her marriage and the downfall of her homeland, the shards of her pride turning into shame, and her contempt for the one who caused the disaster.
Powerfully done and heart-breaking. Brilliant response to the challenge. Thank you  |
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I Hate You, Goldberry (PG)
by Viv.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [use of the semi-word "ho"]
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:57 pm
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Ha ha ha! Now I won't ever read that part of the Silm without thinking about Beren taking a shower bi-monthly! 
Outstanding! |
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Above It All (G)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [A singing silmaril]
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:50 pm
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| Bah! What a series! You got me laughing like a mad woman! Excellent history of the Silmarils in a nutshell. |
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After the Fall (PG)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [demented humor]
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:47 am
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Indeed. That one in the water knew where it was.
LMAO!
Priceless! |
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Shards of Courage (G)
by Alassante.
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:06 am
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| Excellent, Al, this is excellent -- the characterizations, the way you built tension in this piece, the feelings of loss, insecurity, hope and shame blended in one beautifully drawn short story A wonderful response to the challenge! |
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Lilac (PG)
by Ania.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Major Angst]
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:17 am
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| Oh, Ania, you've got a very poignant and beautifully written story here. I adore your portrayal of Gilraen, a strong woman who will never forget her husband and the love they shared, but who can also move on in her life and accept what is to come. She must think about her son, and still everything around her will always remind her of Arathorn. I like the imagery, the symbolism, and the elegant language of this piece -- especially the lingering notion of the music of the Valar in the sounds of nature. Wonderfully done! Brava! |
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Striking Out (G)
by NancyBrooke.
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:09 am
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What a wonderful drabble series, Nancy! I really like the tale you've told us here. It's touching, interesting, beautifully written, and very 'hobbity'
Congratulations This is a splendid response to the challenge. Thank you! |
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A Beggar of Distinction (G)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [none]
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 3:19 am
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| No wonder why Aragorn was speechless Very interesting idea, very nicely written. Thank you for sharing |
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A Little Closer to the Edge, My Love … (PG-13)
by Sulriel.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [sexual; adult themes]
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Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:17 am
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| Beautiful writing! Thank you a lot for the uptade. This is excellent |
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The Rescue of Celebrian (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [ 26] Warnings [Angst and scary images/flashbacks.]
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Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:45 pm
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They won't give up, will they? They won't think "sometimes there's nothing we can do?", each of them seeks a solution in their own fashion. And I'm going to patiently wait to see what will happen next and what Elladan and Elrohir will come up with.
Beautiful, detailed descriptive parts, the style of story-telling that I've always admired and loved since the very first story by you I read. Thanks for the update, and keep posting |
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