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Reviews by BlackRaven

StoryReview
Life in Fandom (PG)
by allamericanreject.

Chapters [4]
Reviews [12]
Fri Nov 25, 2005 9:13 pm

I like this so far. It is certainly entertaining! I wonder though if you could have a chapter that has Harry Potter in it a bit more. I have an idea that I hope you would consider using if you were to comply to me request.

What if there was a domestic 'disturbance' over at Harry Potter house with Voldemort trying to kill Harry? You could have the fellowship commenting on it as it happens or something, comments like: (You can use said comment)

"They're at it AGAIN? This is the eighth time this week that they've tried to kill each other! Why can't they give it a rest, they both know that neither one of them can die, they'd just mysteriously come back to life a few hours later and then they would be at it again! Even Peter and Hook gave up after a few months. Six YEARS is just rediculous! Though, now that I think about it, there was that mysterious poisoning of Hook a couple of days back..."

(You could have aurors show up and have them complaining and commenting on how annoying it was getting having to rush to save Harry from Voldemort. Maybe the reason that Voldemort [and Death Eaters] keep trying to kill Harry is because he keeps pranking them or something)

You can use any of these ideas, I don't care. Though, if you don't use them I was wondering if I could use your idea of Fandom for a story I have been wanting to write, that way I could use these ideas in that story.

Keep up the good work.