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StoryReview
The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.
Chapters [23]
Reviews [21]
Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
Mon May 23, 2005 10:46 am
Hey, great story, liked it a lot. However, your Hungarian lines are in need of some correction... there are some typos, and some words are not suffixed properly (for example "férj", one would not say that, rather férjem - my husband- or férjuram -my lord husband-, or some endearment. )
But otherwise, I liked it a lot.