Reviews by theladyscribe

Okay, NOW Panic! · Tue May 30, 2006 11:54 am

Poor Lindir. I do believe he deserved it, though. And the images of the Elves in 50s-style boxing outfits was quite hi-larious. Lovely work, as usual.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Sun Apr 16, 2006 4:05 pm

I would be interested in anything! Your work is so lovely. Though I think I will probably watch for it on ff.net now, since I go there more often.

This was a very wonderful epilogue. So often, the epilogues are more along the lines of "and they lived happily ever after the end" rather than an actual ending. I like that you tied it back to the early parts of the story and thought that the falcons flying overhead was a very nice touch.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Thu Apr 13, 2006 6:20 pm

Wonderful. It was the perfect mix of silliness and seriousness and wedding-night jitterness. Fantastic.

Now, will they be telling Elphir that they decided not to marry after all and merely spent a night together in a bolted room alone? That would be quite hilarious I suspect.

Looking forward to the epilogue, even if it is the last.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Sat Apr 01, 2006 10:17 am

*laughs* Of course she would be asleep!

I like this sneaky!Eomer. He's fun and resourceful. This chapter was absolutely delightful. I could see everyone perfectly in my mind, and every moment of it was wonderful. I can see what you meant by it coming very easily to you; it flowed very well. Now I want to know what you'll do with the wedding night.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Sat Mar 25, 2006 8:35 am

Oh lovely, lovely! I adored that wedding service! It was so... Rohirric. I love that you did it from Eowyn's eyes, rather than Eomer's or Lothiriel's; I think it works better when there's an outsider to get the reactions from both sides.

C'est fantastique!

Annun

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:08 pm

*grins* I like Hergyth. She seems a very sensible woman.

I do want to see how Eomer explains his behaviour to Eowyn. That should certainly prove interesting....

Waiting patiently for the big day...

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Mon Mar 13, 2006 8:27 pm

I feel a bit silly now. Of course he would have chosen Midwinter because it's the longest night of the year. That's sneaky Eomer for you.

Wonderful chapter, as always. I especially enjoyed the snowball fight. And Eomer's "tradition."

Okay, NOW Panic! · Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:00 pm

My only complaint for this chapter (ch. 23) is that the quotation marks didn't seem to work. Instead, there are a combination of funny accents and Euro signs. Just thought you'd want to know, because it made it a little difficult to read.

Other than that, this was a marvelous chapter. I do wish we could get into Halladan's head a little more, though. I'd like to know his thoughts on Penny.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Tue Mar 07, 2006 6:26 pm

Oh, that Eomer's a sneak! Creeping into her tent like that... And of course Elphir showed up just afterward. I like how they handled him, though. Quite marvelous.

Lovely chapter, as always.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Wed Mar 01, 2006 5:41 pm

And will she be able to reel off all the names of those shades of grey? That's the real question.

Also, I don't like it when people end chapters with things like "nothing could go wrong then..." It makes me nervous.

Update soon!

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