Reviews by theladyscribe

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Fri Feb 24, 2006 4:01 pm

*laughs in delight* I love how they handled the suitors! Especially poor Hallas - I wonder if he ever learned that the last dragon known in Middle Earth was killed a good hundred years before he was born.

I do wonder what the rest of the story is with Midwinter. You'll have to explain that one soon, I think.

Here's to the next chapter, may it be swift in coming!

Okay, NOW Panic! · Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:31 am

Oh no, I love the long chapters. There are few things better in the mornings than finding a new chapter to read.

This one had all the right amounts of drama and comedy, as usual. I'm intrigued by Halladan; I hope Penny gets to spend more time around him (I'm sure that she will). I love that you remembered to make Sam/Ban still incredibly shy even after all the Hobbits have been through. I do wonder if Penny will be telling anyone about the goings-on in the Shire, though.

Keep up the good work! I love this story.

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Thu Feb 16, 2006 6:37 pm

I must say, the only complaint I could possibly have with this chapter is your not allowing us to see the encounter that Eomer had with the reputed dead sea creature. I suspect that would have been most entertaining, indeed.

Ah well. Here's to the next chapter and dealing with those pesky suitors!

Okay, NOW Panic! · Wed Feb 15, 2006 10:46 pm

*gasp* You are a horrid person for cutting the chapter off at that moment. I should have expected it, of course, especially after you mentioned that the chapter was supposed to be much longer. I am guessing that "Halbarad" is in fact his eldest son - it wouldn't make sense for him to come back from the dead, after all. I look forward to the next chapter; hopefully it will not be so long a wait (just kidding, of course - if you did not update for an entire year, I would still read this) (that doesn't, however, give you permission to wait that long).

Waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter,
Annun

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Fri Feb 10, 2006 8:24 pm

I have messages? I didn't know that. I'll have to look for them...

Lovely chapter, as usual. I was really hoping to see how Eomer would "deal" with Lothiriel's other suitors, though. Perhaps next time?

Okay, NOW Panic! · Sat Feb 04, 2006 11:22 pm

Lovely chapter! Glad to see that Penny's on the mend. I was worried about her for a bit. I can't wait until the next chapter - will she finally meet the sons of Halbarad? I hope so...

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Fri Feb 03, 2006 8:59 pm

*giggles*

I loved the between-kisses banter. It was so...them. It fit beautifully. And I truly loved this line: "Éomer stared at her and all of a sudden decided to ditch his sister’s advice. It had been a silly idea as well to give her Gúthwinë." To me, that just summed up everything that is this lovely lovely story. Cheers!

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Sat Jan 28, 2006 10:02 am

I love how their thoughts and actions parallel each other in this chapter. It works very well, though I worry that they'll never come to a conclusion if they don't 'fess up to their mentors. Please let Eomer take off for Dol Amroth on a whim while Lothiriel sneaks out of the city to go back to Ithilien. That would be torturous, to have them show up in opposite cities looking for each other. But then again, I'm a cruel person who likes to torture her favorite pairings. *shrug*

Here's to having them get together at the last minute!

Of Falcons and Mûmakil · Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:54 pm

Too lazy to review.

But hey, at least I'm honest. Razz smiley face

Anyways, this is such a delightful story, and I really enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see Eomer's reaction to Lothiriel's leaving. It should prove to be...interesting.

Sere mi Eru... Lady Scribe of Avandell

Okay, NOW Panic! · Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:27 pm

We call "stick-in-the-mud" freeze-tag here. And this was such a good chapter, though I am rather worried about Penny now. Was she allergic to some of the food or something? Or is she just ill?

I look forward to the next chapter, and I simply cannot wait until she meets Halbarad's sons.

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