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StoryReview
Forever Yours (R)
by cymrulady.
Chapters [19]
Reviews [11]
Warnings [Character death - eventually]
Sun Jul 30, 2006 7:44 pm
I've surfed through here several times and I've no idea how I missed your story. Shocked smiley face I enjoyed your basic story-line but your ability to convey character emotion was what grabbed my attention. Your portrayal of Arien's grief was especially poignant. I'll admit, I am not a crier by nature but nonetheless tears slipped out as I read your last chapter. You might have lengthened out the final chapter a bit, her demise seemed to happen a bit quickly. However, it was an enjoyable read!