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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:05 am
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Great chapter again, edge of your seat stuff! I love that Elaine was dishing out orders lol. I was reading on your site that you weren't as keen on Lim Aear when you read it back. I love Lim Aear BECAUSE it's fairy tale-esque. Sometimes when the real world gets too much for us I think we need a bit of fairy tale romance to remind us of what we used to want (prince on the white horse etc!). Angst is good and makes a good plot, but too much of it and no happiness at all in a story is too much in my opinion. If we wanted constant grief and hassle we'd not need to seek a time-out in fiction lol! It's sad that true love in reality is rare, but it is there, I believe myself lucky enough to have found it, but day-to-day life means it's impossible to be that fairy tale all of the time. Reading Lim Aear makes me forget the bills, not care what I have to cook for dinner, yet there's no clean dishes, I couldn't give a damn if the whole house needs a tidy up, and that the baby is now screaming for some attention! It reminds me that romance still lives if you dig beneath all of the above! So no, I don't think it too girlish fantasy-ish or romantic, I think your other readers would agree with me that it would be a shame for any of it to be changed or re-written, especially as it is your first fiction. Anyone?
(ps sorry I talk too much! lol) |
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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Tue Jan 16, 2007 10:15 am
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| ooooooooooooooooo exciting chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! I'm glad Legolas got angry as Elaine needs to understand the weight of her responsibility to Lim Aear and it's people. |
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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Sun Dec 24, 2006 8:23 pm
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| Agreeing with sofia - beginning of their downfall! Eek! Great chapter, worth the wait! It's so sad she can't share her happiness with anyone when she is outside of Lim Aear, like her family. It is hard to see how that side of things can end amiably! I'd choose being in Lim Aear with Legolas over a modern life anyday lol |
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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Wed Nov 22, 2006 1:30 pm
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| THANKYOU SO MUCH! I spent all day at the hospital cos they said my waters had broken - only to be sent home in the eve telling me they made a mistake and baby wasn't budging! GRRRR lol - I read when I got home and it was such a feel-good chapter that I had a grin plastered on my face the rest of the evening - I think my poor husband thinks I've completely lost it!! I was laughing so much at the end, was a great way to finish a brill chapter! Can't wait to see how this feast plays out - I have sympathy for Elaine already!! |
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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Wed Nov 15, 2006 12:43 pm
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| I can't believe you were reluctant to start this - you are such an amazing writer! I think you've done so great with this story. The wait for reconciliation is most stories tends to drag and eventually you get tired of waiting but with lim aear I've been hooked the whole way! Every chapter has been captivating! A lot of stories are let down by the sex not feeling real but that was a great chapter!! |
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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Sun Oct 01, 2006 6:33 pm
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| fantastic stuff! So emotionally written you can't help but feel your heart ache everytime she pushes him away, I really hope she comes around! I don't usually follow works in progress as the suspense kills me!... But I am addicted to this story!! Keep up the great work, and I beg you (and the other readers will agree with me!) never to give up on this story! |
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Lim Aear (NC-17)
by SilentNiobe.
Chapters [30]
Reviews [ 69] Warnings [Mention of Rape, Explicit Sexual Content]
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Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:30 pm
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| Your writing is captivating! This is very original and I love it, the suspense is killing me! The beautiful relationship you have built between the two will make their coming together sizzle. |
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