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The Things They Carried (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:33 pm
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These were all beautifully written Nancy.  Very sweet. I am not sure what it was that Book carried - was it the burden of others?
I very much liked this of Jayne: "She’s his way into and out of any situation takes his fancy, ticket and destination." And how he wouldn't mind his slice of the pie bigger. Well spoken.
I have to admit, as much as I love the playfulness of Wash & his dinos, tha Tams and Mal's shoulder burdens carried.... my favorite of them all was Kaylee. So vivid and bright into the world of the female mechanic we love. So tender and hopeful, despite what else may come. That one, above all nine, is my absolute favorite. You gave grace. Thank you. |
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In His Blood (G)
by LadyAlariel.
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:21 pm
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Lady A - I enjoyed this Drabble and while at first I wasn't sure at what stage of the movies this was, it became quite clear, fast. I almost want to tell you not to put your near equally as long OOC notes at the bottom. Not because I don't think you shouldn't express yourself (did I just do a double neg? sorry) but rather, because all of that comes across in the short drabble.
I thought you captured 'new to Hogwarts First Year Harry' most wonderfully. Nice job! |
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I Know (PG)
by Viv.
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Wed Oct 31, 2007 1:26 pm
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| Viv! This was beautiful! Normally I don't think on the Mother.... so I'm so grateful you took this character and put her importance and insight to life. Thank you for this. Well done and simply brilliant. |
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Thirteen (PG)
by Rhapsody.
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Sat Jan 27, 2007 1:36 pm
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Very nice Rhaps! I have never watched this show but your drabble has me VERY interested in these characters, the plot line and the historical background. I especially enjoyed Chpt. 2 the most - for the main chars. despaire and sense of responsibility, honor, etc was solid and evident.
Bravo!! I enjoyed how you did your chapters in Drabble format too. Quite clever. |
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Silver and Gold (G)
by WhoaNellie.
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Tue Dec 12, 2006 11:16 pm
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| Hhheehhee... fun drabble. How very impish of you (Picard)! |
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Ideas Are Bulletproof (R)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Language]
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Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:59 am
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Wow! Very powerful and thought provoking piece SW! This was fantastic. You really got into the deep layered mind of Finch and I'm impressed with his very linear thought process on the whole affair and struggle shown he is still having with his decision.
My fav line: It frightens us, I think, because it makes us wonder, could I do the same? That fellow there is human, just like me.
I would say that line of thinking is dead on. Anytime some act of violence or forced justice occurs, I don't believe there's any one of us who doesn't try to put ourselves in those shoes. Even if it's for a brief, nightmarish second. Bravo! |
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Zero Point Six Eight Seconds (G)
by trekqueen.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [none]
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Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:46 am
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Very nice drabble TQ! You have captured Data's thought process perfectly.
Fav. line(s): I would have given up everything: betraying my friends and turning my back on saving Earth. By accepting the gift of humanity she offered me, I would be condemning humankind to destruction.
That's some serious busniess going on in less than one second. Bravo! |
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Last edited by FatiferousPoet on Sat Dec 09, 2006 11:01 am |
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Dulcius ex asperis (PG)
by Rhapsody.
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Sat Dec 09, 2006 10:30 am
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Very nice keeping consistent with the show with the Latin. As I think I've seen X-Files once, I am glad you added that author's note. That said, having vague idea who the chars, are, this drabble was easy to enjoy and understand that these two characters should have given into their desires long ago. But didn't.
At least they did now! Way to go! |
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Farewell to Lorien (G)
by Hiemille.
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Sun Dec 03, 2006 3:10 am
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| It's never easy to write meaningful poetry and this piece has a very Robert Frost descriptive sort of feel. Let me know if you have other poems that I've missed. I'd be interested to read. |
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Too Sexy (PG)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [May cause hysterical laughter]
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Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:40 am
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OMG... I saw your name online and wanted to see if you had any stories... and came across this!!!!
How awesome is this?
So funny, I feel like falling out of my chair. I love this!! "I'm too sexy for my HORSE!"
As barely a LotR fan, I could totally appreicate this!!! Way to go. Thank you for this. I laughed so hard, I sent the cats scattering scared. |
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