Yours to command (PG-13)
by Lialathuveril.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 65]
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Fri Dec 01, 2006 3:53 pm
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Lia,
a great new chapter in your story. I like the way how you get your characters defined, they all have a story and a well portrayed psycholoical background. Just the little glimpse you gave us on the motivation of Lady Wilwarin, as little sympathy I can manage for her, shows a lot more depth than the usual design of evil characters. II can imagine it is had to write the evil ones as fine as the good guys, but you have the skill to do so. am looking forward to you portrayal of Mûzgash, to take a guess: he is the heir of the king of Haradrim that Theoden killed in the battle of the Pelenor?
Lothiriel and Eomer are both great, esp. as they begin to open up a bit.
Well, I have to hurry. Thank you so much for the new chapter!
Bye
valieexport
PS: Will we see more from Galador? I MISS him!  |
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Yours to command (PG-13)
by Lialathuveril.
Chapters [34]
Reviews [ 65]
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Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:13 am
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Lialathuveril, as I told you earlier, I really like the new image of Lothiriel that begins to show here. Far away from the average ideas of her character, I am looking forward on how she will develop within this story. I hope it will be a long one! There are so many new, never-though-about possibilities in this way of portraying her. The way how you describe her own perception of the world aroun her is quite unique too and gives some great new insights in the world of Tolkien.
PLease post another chapter soon! I am really looking forward to it! |
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