Reviews by 5292165

Prey for the Hunter · Tue Oct 09, 2007 1:38 pm

I do plan on readinbg this story and I'm sure it will be most enjoyable. I wonder, though, if you will finish your "Sinde" story. That was one of my favorites!

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Tue Sep 18, 2007 4:39 pm

Almost three months. Are you stlll there? Are you still writing? Please say you are!

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Fri Jul 20, 2007 5:39 pm

After the first paragraph, I finished the story with a lump in my throat. Elyril going out on his own? How could he be ready for THAT? Wasn't it just a chapter or two ago when he....(wasn't it just a year or two ago when I took my son to kindergarten?) Time. What a humbler for all of us. The cutting of the string to his soul by his parents brought me to tears. I absolutely loved this chapter and , of course, you know I love this story.
Having Erestor appear again was a treat. A new insight into his character by having him get to the banquet early just to watch everyone's entrance.
I thoroughly enjoyed the conversations between Aranel and Nede. Yes, he is trying to find some "middle ground" (compared to Amaras), but he is still Rohme to the bone.
Okay. You've done Aranel, Huril and Elyril. Nilfin's turn. And please...do him justice. Thank again for this literary treat!

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Thu May 10, 2007 12:25 am

A wonderful chapter that gives some unexpected insight into your characters.
It was interesting to see Amaras get irritated twice with Phaila in this chapter; once over Thranduil and the other after getting caught in the open with Huril. I especially liked the description of Amaras' quiet tongue-lashing with fingers jabbing the air to make his point. A Rohme husband at his best and a long-married couple who know each other inside and out!
What a very interesting portrayal of Huril; not quite what I had pictured, but most enjoyable. Definitely a bit of his mother and father. I could almost feel the sparks flying off Nilfin when he returned home. These two brothers are something else. My favorites!
I dislike Tihamer more and more everytime he makes an appearance. Same with Lorand. Malta may have forgiven him but not me!
As much as I look forward to your updates, I do get a little sad when they come. That's because I know it will be another month orr two until we get another one!
Thanks very much for this and happy writing!

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Mon Mar 12, 2007 1:26 am

Worth the wait but very unsettling. As I read each paragraph, I began to feel an edginess; almost as though I didn't want to continue, but I had to know what new twist the plot was taking. I'll have to reread this one. I'm sure I missed a lot racing through it the first time. Thanks for posting. No thanks for a restless night wondering what's going to happen next.

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:58 am

Where are you? Hopefully on a wonderful vacation. I'm going through withdrawal without an update since January!

The Phoenix and the Griffin · Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:34 am

This is by far the BEST story I have ever read in any fan-ficiton site. The characters,are so real I feel as though I know them. The descriptions of the kingdoms and realms is so rich I need to reread the chapters in order to fully enjoy the flavor.
I only registered at Open Scrolls so that I could leave this much over-due review. This is a beautiful story and I will be sad when it ends. I'm sure it must get old for you after almost 100 chapters. I hope you will have the patience to take your time in finishing this. Don't rush the end! Many of us will be very sad to read the final chapter.

PS. I'd love to see Nilfin meet his match and marry!

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