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StoryReview
The Price of Immortality (NC-17)
by Siladan.
Chapters [16]
Reviews [29]
Warnings [sexual situations]
Sun Mar 25, 2007 2:23 am
Siladan, i just read the message you left about wrapping it all up. It has finally forced me into action to actually review this story. I have been a fan of this series from the start but never left a message of my appreciation. So here it goes... This series is by far the most well developed fan fiction i have ever read, and believe me i have read plenty( ive been at it for almost nine years). I would hate to see this story fall into the lost world of incompleted fan fiction. there are so many plot twists that i would love to see forfilled, such as the Erick, Eli story and if they are a tad more evil then we all suspect. The Randy and Lori story, will they ever be together again and if so could they handle a relationship when Randy is having someone elses child. And finally the most facinating plot line, who is this new evil and how are the elves going to defeat it.

I'm going to finish up by trying to appeal to your heart. When you didn't up date this story for months at i time i had actually given up hope and stopped visiting this site because all the other fanfiction was just not up to scratch (no offence to other authors!). Finally i decided to check to see if something had changed and to my delight i found that seven more chapter had been posted. I seriously did not leave my computer until i had read them all. This kind of fan fiction deserves a spectacular ending, and that means developing all the plots and tying all the lose ends. I believe that if you do that this story would go down as the most imaginative, well developed fan fiction in this genre.

i really hope you continue on. Keep up the amazing writing and good luck. ( you will diffinately be hearing more from me if you do)

sincerly Mrs Vicky Smith