Login

Lost Password?

Create New Account

Navigation

Reviews by Ithryn

StoryReview
'Til Death Do Us Part (PG-13)
by Haleth.
Chapters [46]
Reviews [55]
Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:50 pm
So glad to finally catch up with Haleth and Inglor here, and that you're posting regular updates! There can never be too much H & I, as far as I'm concerned. Haleth's sulking tickles me, and Finarfin having to delve into millenia of childraising memories to realize that she's pouting, is funny. I like your take on Finarfin in this story, and can empathize with his pique with the Telerin ambassador for needling him with the first kinslaying. Elves and mortals are alike in that stead sometimes, aren't they - no matter how much one atones, some like to dwell on old grievances. This edit really reads well, I like the way you fleshed it out more, especially making Finarfin more empathetic. He certainly has a tough job, especially since Inglor's return with Haleth in tow. As always, looking forward to more. Write on!