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Oak and Willow (G)
by Marnie.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [14]
Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:08 pm
Ahh! Don't stop there! Don't do it! Please! Although... now that I think on it, you could have stopped at a worse point. They could still be separated, for example. *squirm* Rrrrr.... but it's so good!
 
 
Oak and Willow (G)
by Marnie.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [14]
Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:39 pm
Wow! The chapters caught me up so much that I couldn't make myself stop to review! I love this! The way you write the characters here is refreshing and it seems so natural, too. The Silmarilion doesn't really go into too much detail about small events, but I get the feeling that this is the sort of thing we would see if it did.

I like the way Nerwen is struggling, it seems very true to her character given how young she is in comparison to her age in the war of the ring. I also like the way that you continue to call her Nerwen even though she is trying to become Galadriel. It shows, to me, that she has definately NOT gotten past what has happened. Celeborn is just awesome, too, beating her in their verbal wordplay without even trying. ^_^ Wonderful job! Can't wait to read more!
 

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Last edited by SpiritoftheGauntlets on Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:51 am
 
Oak and Willow (G)
by Marnie.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [14]
Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:21 pm
Oh chapter 2 was brilliant! I loved the way you wrote this! I was just as confused as the elves were until I realized that it was the first moon rising! Brilliantly done! Wonderful!
 
 
That Tall Fellow Next to Galadriel; A short essay about Celeborn (G)
by Marnie.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [21]
Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:04 pm
YES! *applause* Nice work!

I myself happen to have been guilty of writing off Celeborn the first time through, but my Dad changed my perspective on that front and I never went back to it again. Your essay was so good I ended up calling him over to read it. Nice work!