Reviews by melbann

My Dear Bandobras · Tue Aug 10, 2004 11:33 am

Well... she's on her way. Can't wait to read Legolas's letter after their first meeting. Wonder what he'll think of her???? Again you are doing something entirely different, like Pottymouth, and it takes a while to 'get into it', but the letter idea works for me. It just takes a little more work on the part of the reader to keep up with everything! Lego's Mom's letter was a riot. Hope he takes care of the lapels!

The Captain's Last Gift · Wed Jul 21, 2004 3:37 pm

sorry...continuing the review above... I hit enter without finishing my review (now I feel stupid). I've been afraid you'd forgotten about this story but the wait was definitely worth it.............

nicely descriptive..................

The Captain's Last Gift · Wed Jul 21, 2004 3:34 pm

PRAISE THE VALOR

From Darkness to Light · Thu May 27, 2004 8:49 am

I'm hooked. I love Miran's character. Good writing!!

The Touch of Sight · Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:31 am

I wanted to thank you for the quick updates and long chapters.... I like this story... and even though it's not an origional idea I haven't read a fanfic that uses this plot before. I like your characterizations of Thrandiul and Elrond and all Legolas' friends. I think you've done a good job of showing the emotions they experience as they are faced by Legolas' slow deteriation and their loss of hope and the way they must continue on in the daily routine of life. Good set up for the future with the serial killer thing. I liked the barmaid! in the short time you introduced her to us. My first thought was she was one of the servants who tended to Legolas for Aragorn (hope for romance), but that didn't last. Please continue! I'm anxious for him to awaken and become once again the vibrant and fit Legolas! I'm sure it'll take a while as you've be careful to detail his decay!!!! Thanks and don't be discouraged.

The Touch of Sight · Wed Apr 14, 2004 8:08 pm

You've whetted my appetite......... Please continue!! I loved 'The Dead Zone' on TV. What happened to Arod????

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