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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Tue Jun 08, 2004 11:15 am
Wow. Impressive, for once the shortness gives it the exact touch - any longer and this startling effect would be ruined! Wonderful and elegantly written! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:49 pm
Very well done! Beautifully written! I can feel the emptiness of a room full of things, the desolation; Pippin's pain, wanting -- needing to feel a connection to Boromir one last time.

Brava, Nancy, BRAVA!
 
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queenoftheshire

Joined: 03 Dec 2003
Reviews: 19
Location: Catching Birds with a Pool Skimmer
Tue Jun 08, 2004 5:10 pm
Short and Sweet! I love you're 'drabbles' Nancy!!
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Jun 10, 2004 8:11 am
OH! *heartfelt sigh* The empty room. Yes. You got it exactly right, and in a drabble, no less!

"(I touch everything)" so very Pip, "But no one comes." a perfect last line...
 
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Thu Jun 10, 2004 2:57 pm
So beautiful. So sad. Crying or Very sad smiley face
 
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Beruthiel

Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: Sandwiched between the Twinkies
Mon Jun 14, 2004 7:22 am
Very poignant, beautifully written. Well done!
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Jan 19, 2005 7:05 am
How sad, and yet beautiful. A touching rememberance of the gift of a life. Thank you for sharing.
 
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Saoirse

Joined: 17 Aug 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: In your closet
Wed Jan 19, 2005 4:20 pm
Oh, my. How lovely. I can feel the hollowness there... the quietness. Poor Pip, he'll have to learn to accept it.
 
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Wed Jan 19, 2005 7:37 pm
I don't usually like drabbles to be honest, but this was very moving. Actually if you ever did a longer scene on this same theme, I'd be really interested to read it, though you managed to get the sentiment across ably in this. (As in, I'm not saying this is too short. What I mean is, I think with your insight into that moment, you could have a real tear-jerker if you decided to expand on it Very Happy smiley face )
 
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003
Reviews: 94
Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
Wed Jan 26, 2005 4:53 pm
This is my first drabble read/review ... It's beautiful. You were able to express so much in so few words. I didn't read the summary before the drabble, but I knew it was Boromir's room, and the "fool" mention made me think of Pippin. This has really made me ponder on their friendship. They traveled together for only a few weeks, but you present the lasting effect the fellowship had in their lives. You are also able to portray Pip's character really well ("I touch everything" Wink smiley face ... I'm sure Gandalf would agree!).
 
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