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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:17 am

Interesting! You certainly paint an untraditional but, I think, appropriate, portrait of Denethor - putting hope in someone outside his family, putting his people first. Love "a whiter seat." Good job - you said everything you needed to.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:40 am

Well 'drabbled'! An interesting idea, perhaps a bit of comfort before the darkest dizzy spin into complete despair... Cool Smile smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Fri Jun 11, 2004 4:20 pm

Wonderful! And you say it is your first? A great "drabble" - you show a different pov and an original side to Denethor! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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