Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:17 am
Interesting! You certainly paint an untraditional but, I think, appropriate, portrait of Denethor - putting hope in someone outside his family, putting his people first. Love "a whiter seat." Good job - you said everything you needed to.
SilverMoonLady
Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Fri Jun 11, 2004 11:40 am
Well 'drabbled'! An interesting idea, perhaps a bit of comfort before the darkest dizzy spin into complete despair... Cool
Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Fri Jun 11, 2004 4:20 pm
Wonderful! And you say it is your first? A great "drabble" - you show a different pov and an original side to Denethor!