Reviews for "For Love, Duty, and Honor"

Sat Jun 12, 2004 12:05 pm

Sorry, luv. The grammar mistakes in this are really bad and i cant read on until they are fixed.

Here is a great example: "Binded for eternity" - That should be 'bound'. This type of error continues all throughout chapter 1.

The characters dont seem too bad so far and i like your flowery use of descriptions. Best advice would be for you to get this fic beta read to show it and you in its best form.

Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:27 am

I agree with Mora. Sorry...
It has potential, I think. The grammar mistakes are, unfortunetly, far too distracting. I really like how you describe everything. It´s rather beautiful and the characterization is quite good.

Have someone beta read it and I would love to read the rest!

Just a question; how can she be a maiden if Legolas is her lover? Wink smiley face

Mon Jun 28, 2004 12:52 pm

Very intriging story. I'm glad at the end it wasn't too predictable (he left instead of staying). I like the epilogue cuz it's so true.

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