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NancyBrooke

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport

Sun Jun 13, 2004 2:59 pm

This is a nice little vignette between well sketched characters. I am, however, very confused as to when it is taking place; and I can only think you meant 'Gondorian' castle instead of 'Rohirrim'. Why is Pippin crying, exactly? just loneliness? or fear of something about to happen. I would have liked a tad more context.

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Monaleoht

Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda

Sun Jun 13, 2004 4:32 pm

Very nice! BTW - it's Denathor! lol. Anyway, well written and the song at the end was a sweet additition!

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queenoftheshire

Joined: 03 Dec 2003
Reviews: 19
Location: Catching Birds with a Pool Skimmer

Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:18 pm

Lol, yes very nice. And actually it's Denethor... Hehehe

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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar

Mon Oct 25, 2004 5:20 am

Nice piece, but the term "dreamcatcher" confused me. I would not think that it would be used in ME. Otherwise, I enjoyed it. Thank you.

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Halfwest

Joined: 21 Aug 2003
Reviews: 8
Location: Ladros

Mon Feb 13, 2006 5:13 am

Sweet. One tiny fix: in the book, Faramir's eyes are grey, not golden. Otherwise lovely.

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