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EDibble

Joined: 26 Jun 2003 Reviews: 17
Location: Hudson, New Hampshire, USA
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Wed Sep 17, 2003 10:42 pm
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| Your last installment makes me even more of a fan. You have depicted Eomer as the gentleman yet realiistic man when it comes of desires of the flesh. Well done! Your characters are realistically written, and we all want to learn more. |
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CorruptPharmacist
Joined: 24 Aug 2003 Reviews: 4
Location: The OFUM
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Fri Oct 03, 2003 9:36 pm
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| Excellently written! I enjoyed the story very much. Each chapter left me eager to read what came next. EDibble's review expresses my own thoughts well, so I'll just echo a 'DITTO!' to what they said. |
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Ania

Joined: 08 Sep 2003 Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Tue Jan 27, 2004 5:30 am
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| That was really sweet, I really liked it and I loved your presentation of Eomer and Lothiriel, both their characters were convicing and amusing to read, I really enjoyed it, very well done! |
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eokat
Joined: 27 Jan 2004 Reviews: 31
Location: England
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Tue Jan 27, 2004 6:37 pm
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Hi have also read this story first on another archive web-site, and I found it to be absolutely riveting and can't wait until the next chapter. You have shown a lot of depth in the characters which can only help the love they need to grow for each other and has got them past the embarrasing first night. Keep on please.Kat.  |
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
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Tue Feb 03, 2004 10:08 pm
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| A very well written portrayal of the arkwardness of a wedding night. You have done an excellent job of characterizing Lothiriel and Eomer. Once they get past their wedding night, I would love to see what would come next with their marriage. I am looking forward to your next installment. |
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Novedhelion

Joined: 04 Sep 2003 Reviews: 42
Location: NC
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Fri Mar 26, 2004 8:12 am
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Cute story! Please finish soon!
Novedhelion
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Stupidcat
Joined: 27 Mar 2004 Reviews: 3
Location: Texas, USA
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Sat Mar 27, 2004 12:33 pm
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This is a very good story. Original and very humorus. Please update soon and keep up the good work.  |
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JoyfulHobbit
Joined: 21 Mar 2004 Reviews: 1
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Sat Apr 03, 2004 6:46 pm
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| This really was a nice story. Aren't you going to update it? There is, after all, plenty more to write about... |
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Sun Apr 25, 2004 10:20 pm
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Boy what luck to find this tale again....I had read the first 2 chapters somewhere else along time ago. So, I read the whole thing tonight. I am so pleased to see that it has continuned. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for all of your hard work
Mina Sedth,
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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004 Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Mon Jun 14, 2004 9:27 pm
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| You could increase the tension more if they told each other a few more stories, but that would be sheer torture for the reader. Though I must say I like how you are developing these characters. I do hope their will be more! |
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