Reviews for "By Previous Arrangement"

Fri Jul 16, 2004 5:14 pm

I just read your first chapter. I like your story. In chapter 1 the only thing I noticed is that you had Eomer and Lothiriel's fathers meeting about their betrothal several times as they were growing up the last time not being very many years before the wedding. Eomer was born in 2991 and his father, Eomund, Third Marshal of the Mark, was killed by orcs in 3002. That means Eomer would have been 11 when he and Eowyn went to live with Theoden in Edoras. Eomer and Lothiriel did not get married until 3020 when he was 29 and she was 21. It might be best to write that Theoden met with the Prince of Dol Amroth after Eomund died rather than Eomer's father who was long deceased....particularly when a lot of people who will be reading your story will be those people who have read Tolkein. Very Happy smiley face

Thu Sep 09, 2004 11:48 pm

Hi this is a great story. Since it's been a while since you updated it, I'm wondering if you've abandoned it. I really would love to read more.

Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:20 am

yay an update!!!! i cant wait till the next chapter!!

Wed Nov 24, 2004 12:20 am

I think this is one of the very first stories of Lord of the Rings FanFiction I had read way back when I joined OSA. Am am so thrilled you updated. I left this on my "Watch This Story" list and am glad to see tha you added a new chapter. I sure hope this means we will be getting more soon.

ilistine

Wed Nov 24, 2004 3:34 pm

At last - some more! Please keep updating - I've been watching this one for over a year too and welcome the new chapter.

Sun Nov 28, 2004 6:15 am

I'm so glad to see another chapter up! For me, your greatest merit is that of writing a-not-so-perfect sex scene, realistic, and in character. Sex is not about perfection, and you show this well. Wink smiley face

Thu Dec 09, 2004 11:36 am

Thank goodness you have added to this. Super chapter and I hope you will write another ASAP. I am sure that Eomer and Lothiriel will thank you, after all you have made them wait rather a long time!!!

Eokat.

PS Are you going to add to other sites also?
Very Happy smiley face

Tue Mar 22, 2005 5:56 am

I ran across this story a few weeks ago, and only just gave in to the temptation to read it. (I try not to get into too many WIPs at one time, it makes for too much anxiety and panting for new chapters. I'm waiting on installments for at least fifteen stories currently lol) I'm very glad I finally read this one. The way you're presenting these characters, and the way the story is progressing. I hope you add more to this soon. Or at least eventually lol. Either way, this story is going on my "Watched" list, and I'll be waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter. Very Happy smiley face

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