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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Thu Jun 17, 2004 9:35 am
Wonderful!

This actually read more like a song than a poem - could it be you have a secret talent for songwriting? Surprised smiley face

I LOVE Carmina Burrana and this was a special little treat for me. Its nice to see another writer give it a mention!

My only negative point is that the repetition of words from lines 1 and 3 in each stanza doesnt work in poetic form. Even tho this reads awkwardly, it still cant take away from such a beautiful example!
 
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Cadiliniel

Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 12
Location: Wales, UK
Thu Jun 17, 2004 10:23 am
Very Happy smiley face Thank you. Yeah, I wrote it quickly, hence me being too lazy to think of a rhyme Surprised smiley faceops: Maybe I'll re-write it at some point, when I have more time!
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Thu Jun 17, 2004 10:34 am
Wow! Impressive! Well written with an elegant syle, its a masterpiece! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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GypsieRose

Joined: 09 Jul 2003
Reviews: 45
Location: Illinois, USA
Sun Jun 20, 2004 2:33 pm
Ooh, very interesting! The use of repetition rather than rhyme is very interesting, especially the way you often manage to turn a word to a slightly different meaning when it is repeated. And it's quite a harrowing look into Denethor's mind as well. I enjoyed this!

--Rose
 
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