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Cadiliniel

Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 12
Location: Wales, UK
Sat Jun 19, 2004 4:50 am
Ooh, I liked it! I think it feels like it could be part of a bigger piece - is that the intention? Two things I noticed though (hope you don't mind me pointing them out) - one spelling mistake in 'blossum', it should be 'blossom'. The other thing is just a matter of intepretation - you talk of Faramir's 'golden eyes'. I think it's a lovely description, but I think doesn't Faramir have grey eyes? It just hit me that gold and grey don't match and that maybe silver would be better - but that's just my personal intepretation Smile smiley face

I'd love to read what happens when Faramir does talk to Eowyn about Boromir! *sniff*
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sat Jun 19, 2004 6:29 am
Very sweet! I agree with Cadi - it seems to be from a bigger story! A lovely drabble! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Gwenevere

Joined: 06 Apr 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: United States
Sat Jun 19, 2004 10:36 am
I'm happy to see this is a WIP. I hope you'll be expanding this piece! It is very enjoyable so far. I like how Faramir is reluctant to speak of Boromir. I think it shows that he is still in mourning. I'm sure Eowyn will be able to help him accept it.

A few spelling errors, though: 'sheild' should be 'shield' and 'aide' should be 'aid' (And what Cadiliniel said). Sorry if this sounds nit-picky, I'm just a freak.

Good beginning (if that is what it is)- I will be watching this story Smile smiley face.

EDIT: Fixing my mistakes.
 

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silentsoul1
Joined: 28 Jun 2004
Reviews: 8
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Mon Jun 28, 2004 12:49 pm
It's interesting how he does not speak of Boromir. It shows Faramir's more sensitive side that his brother's death still hurts and haunts him. Hopefully Eowyn will bring out the best for him.. Smile smiley face
 

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TXFaramirFangirl
Joined: 27 Jun 2004
Reviews: 11
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Wed Jun 30, 2004 11:46 am
Argh! Give me more . . .your chapters are way to dang short!
 
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TXFaramirFangirl
Joined: 27 Jun 2004
Reviews: 11
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Wed Jun 30, 2004 4:51 pm
GO EOWYN!!!! *ish happy* Nice edits hon.
 
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silentsoul1
Joined: 28 Jun 2004
Reviews: 8
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Fri Jul 09, 2004 2:24 am
*cries* I love how he names his son after his brother! It's so sweet! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Irissel
Joined: 30 Jun 2004
Reviews: 3
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Sat Jul 31, 2004 5:34 pm
Lovely story. It was very sweet that he named his son after Boromir. Thanks for the great read!
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Wed Apr 05, 2006 3:07 pm
Very lovely story.
 
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