Reviews for "Little Swan"
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Tue Aug 17, 2004 7:12 am
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Beautiful new chappies - very vivid and well written. I loved the battle - the feelings of the whole was extremely well done. I was surprised that the wolves had managed to get in so far without being noticed though. STill- amazing. Please update soon!  |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Mon Sep 06, 2004 5:22 pm
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***GASP*** So, that's why he was watching her behind the bushes when Haldir walked her home?!! I thought he was just being protective of her. Awwww, poor Beleril.
Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with Naelie and the troops...and Naelie and Orophin???? OR Naelie and Beleril?...uh, just update soon! LOL.
Keep up the good work,
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Sun Sep 19, 2004 5:11 pm
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Oh my goodness, Forest...that was so sad. I actually had to whip-out the tissue for this ending. I'm so happy that she found her father. But. I was very sad when she decided to stay with him and not Beleril. Poor Beleril. He just seems like such a lonely character. So, I'll just imagine him happy...with a family. Loved the story!
Great job!
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