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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Tue Aug 17, 2004 7:12 am

Beautiful new chappies - very vivid and well written. I loved the battle - the feelings of the whole was extremely well done. I was surprised that the wolves had managed to get in so far without being noticed though. STill- amazing. Please update soon! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Mon Sep 06, 2004 5:22 pm

***GASP*** So, that's why he was watching her behind the bushes when Haldir walked her home?!! I thought he was just being protective of her. Awwww, poor Beleril. Sad smiley face

Please update soon! Very Happy smiley face I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with Naelie and the troops...and Naelie and Orophin???? OR Very Happy smiley face Naelie and Beleril?...uh, just update soon! LOL.

Keep up the good work,

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sun Sep 19, 2004 5:11 pm

Oh my goodness, Forest...that was so sad. Crying or Very sad smiley face I actually had to whip-out the tissue for this ending. I'm so happy that she found her father. But. I was very sad when she decided to stay with him and not Beleril. Poor Beleril. He just seems like such a lonely character. So, I'll just imagine him happy...with a family. Loved the story!

Great job!

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face
 
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