Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sun Jul 04, 2004 7:30 pm
First to review? Wow. That was an amazing poem - your words painted pictures in my mind. I loved the last line best, it made me think of an empty void, bare of even cold glittering stars. Elegantly written, I found that it was an enchanting poem, bordering even a song. I loved the grief the end conveyed, yet the magic in the start. Well done!
sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003 Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Mon Jul 05, 2004 11:38 am
That was beautiful and touched my heart... *sniff*
I love what I read, as you did a great wotk with the poem.