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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sun Jul 04, 2004 7:30 pm

First to review? Wow. That was an amazing poem - your words painted pictures in my mind. I loved the last line best, it made me think of an empty void, bare of even cold glittering stars. Elegantly written, I found that it was an enchanting poem, bordering even a song. I loved the grief the end conveyed, yet the magic in the start. Well done! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Mon Jul 05, 2004 11:38 am

That was beautiful and touched my heart... *sniff*

I love what I read, as you did a great wotk with the poem.

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Sivan
 
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