Reviews for "Love of the Sea"

Tue Jul 01, 2003 9:57 pm

Great start, eager to read the rest of it. I hope Imrahil gives those servants hell when he's prince of Dol Amroth Evil or Very Mad smiley face

Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:33 pm

Ooooh, looking forward to the next chapter already. Poor Finduilas and poor Imrahil... there was just one small typo that I spotted: ~“I am in morning.”~ Did you mean "I am in mourning?" It's not a particulary big problem, it just jarred the sentance a little bit for me.

Anyway! Good writing, and some very powerful images. I agree with Scribe- I hope Imrahil kicks the servants asses. Twisted Evil smiley face

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Reviews for "Love of the Sea"