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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
Thu Jul 08, 2004 7:03 am
Short and sweet. Smile smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Thu Jul 08, 2004 7:17 am
A great story! very sweet and funny! Well done! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Thu Jul 08, 2004 1:53 pm
Short, yet sweeter than a ripe nectarine! My oh my, I adored this so.... so sad that it shall remain as it is. Ah, well. I loved it, and I'm glad to have read it *nods* May you continue writing such wonderful ficlets!
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Thu Jul 08, 2004 8:47 pm
"Dawn stole up over the hills like a trickster poised to strike." ... I just have to say, that is one of the most appropriate and perfect opening lines in ficdom. The whole piece was adorable. You really should venture into the lotrfic waters more often. Have I said that before? Is there an echo in here?
 
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Hathor

Joined: 10 Jun 2003
Reviews: 52
Location: Lancashire, England
Fri Jul 09, 2004 9:21 am
This is delightful. I truly enjoyed this; great characterisation and interaction, and just a genuinely 'nice' insight into the relationships of all three. Have to say tha I loved Pippin especially - the almost racing pace of his thoughts and the way they jump from place to place.

Thank you for posting this!
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Sat Jul 10, 2004 11:41 am
Charming! Very funny with some lovely turns of phrase and fun characterizations.

Needs a once over for typos, though (particularly in the Pimpernel paragraph)
 
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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Tue Jul 13, 2004 9:39 pm
Well done. Each character was well established. I loved the variations in culture and grooming. Nice take on Pip and being an heir.
 
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pipinheart
Joined: 13 Sep 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: USA,Ky
Mon Sep 13, 2004 12:52 am
Very enjoyable story... The interaction with the characters was great, and pippin was just so amuzing and had a child like quality,very nice.... Smile smiley face
Please write more..... Love to hear more stories from you
 
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GypsieRose

Joined: 09 Jul 2003
Reviews: 45
Location: Illinois, USA
Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:02 pm
Loved it! And finding a way to get around all that silly dishwashing is a very sensible idea in my opinion. Very Happy smiley face

--Rose
 
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Silvae

Joined: 28 Nov 2004
Reviews: 35
Location: Lyon, France
Sat Jan 29, 2005 12:31 pm
Very funny! Very Happy smiley face Those are typically the kind of weird thoughts one has in the morning (squash with ale?!). It's nice to see the fellowship just talking for once, rather than saving Arda all the time! *ducks* Ok, Ok, I'll shut up! Just wanted to say though, you might want to check it over, like NancyBrooke said. Anyway, go you!! Carrot smiley face
 
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