Reviews for "Eternal"

Thu Jun 23, 2005 8:58 pm

i had nearly forgotten elrilya's request. good description on the actions during the sword fight. i can visualize that impetuous move on elrilya's part. Very Happy smiley face

anyway, i hope you update soon.

Regnet

Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:14 pm

Wooo Hoooo! I log on and find TWO new chapters of this wonderful story! Yay!

When Turgon left, I felt kind of sorry for Glorfindel. What did Turgon leave to find, I wonder? Is it the nature of the Elves to constantly seek the unknown? *shrugs* It's great to ponder the possible reasons for his leaving.

I say that I felt sorry for Glorfindel because he always seemed, to me, like an Elf that would not want to be tied down by heavy responsiblities. No, I'm not saying that he is irresponsible. I'm just saying that he seems to like adventure, and by taking over Turgon's duties, he would have to settle down for a while in one place.

I really like that Elrilya has taken the initiative to make him more comfortable with his new duties. I love their relationship. They always take care of each other. Oh, and I loved the fight scene, too. I'm glad that she did finally get her training.

Great chapters! Keep up the good work, and update soon. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Thu Jun 30, 2005 10:20 am

Oh, no! What has happened to Idril and Elrilya?

I was so happy at the beginning of the chapter; Elrilya and Glorfindel seemed so comfortable in their routine, and so at ease with one another. Then when they left, I felt sorry for Glorfindel. Poor dear. To be left alone with those kinds of responsibilities...so sad. Sad smiley face

Then, to top the chapter off, something happened to Idril and Elrilya! By the end of the chapter, I was in complete shock at the turn of events. I loved it! Very Happy smiley face

Keep up the outstanding work! I loved this chapter, and I’m anxiously looking forward to reading the next.

Michelle...

Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:32 pm

yay! another update! this is great stuff.

Regnet

PS If you have the time, update this on gandyshat too.

Mon Jul 11, 2005 10:15 am

i'm expecting a little mischief on the part of this companion of cirdan's. it's nice to see check open scrolls and find that you're updating. keep it up. Very Happy smiley face

Regnet

Wed Jul 13, 2005 9:50 am

I've enjoyed both of your updates, Trekqueen!

I love the way that you have established a solid foundation for Glorfindel and Elrilya's relationship. I can tell that trush, honesty, and openness are of great importance to both of them.

We know that they are the best of friends, and in many ways depend of each other for companionship. So...I can't wait to see how/if Taurnil will affect their relationship. Will his presense bring them together, or seperate them further apart. Ohhhhh, I can't wait to find out. Very Happy smiley face

You're doing a wonderful job! Update soon.

Michelle...

Sun Jul 17, 2005 4:10 pm

Trekqueen! You have no idea how surprised and delighted I was to find a new chapter posted. Yay!

Well, I see now that I had every reason to worry about Taurnil’s arrival. I loved the sparring scene between Elrilya and Taurnil. Can you say “sexual tension?” Laughing smiley face

Elrilya didn’t seem to mind Taurnil’s company, though, did she? In fact, they seemed to be getting VERY comfortable with one another on that tree branch. But she does seem genuinely interested in him, so...who knows, right? Maybe a relationship with him will push her closer to Glorfindel. *crosses fingers and hopes*

Ohhhh, I wonder what Glorfindel will think of all of this! A love triangle! I love it!

Yes, yes...I know that no one has exchanged ‘I love yous’ but you know what I mean. Very Happy smiley face

Thanks for posting another chapter so soon! Yet, another wonderful update...and it was full of surprises! Great job! Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Sun Jul 24, 2005 3:07 pm

Hey there

I found your story last week and couldn't stop reading it until I reached the last chapter! It is wonderful! Your knowledge of the Elven culture is outstanding and the way you represents the relationships of this mighty Elves is fantastic. The Silmarillion is my favorite of Tolkien's books. Túrin, Feanor, Glorfindel and Tuor are my favorite characters, so I got really pleased to read your work and see all that happened in the First Age through the eyes of these magnificent people. I'm glad you updated today, I hope Glorfindel returns in time to stop Elrilya from leaving with Taurnil.

Keep up the good work and update soon!

Sat Aug 20, 2005 8:33 pm

Oh, you've written another wonderful chapter! Smile smiley face

I can't believe that Elrilya left without resolving her issues with Glorfindel. Of course, he left before she did, but still...she could have waited for him to return.

And what is Taurnil up to? He seemed to have enjoyed rubbing the fact that he and Elrilya are together, into Glorfindel's face. What was that about? It's almost as if he's intentionally causing friction between Elrilya and Glorfindel.

I'll keep my fingers crossed that Glorfindel will "snap out of it" in the next chapter. I can't believe that he rejected her! Grrrr...

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:44 pm

Yay, you're back! I hope all is well. Very Happy smiley face

Your latest chapters are wonderful. While I had thought that maybe there would be some awkwardness when they were reunited, I was pleasantly surprised when there was none. It's great to know that their friendship is solid. Very Happy smiley face

When Elrilya made her request to leave with Glorfindel, the first thing I thought was, "What happened to Taurnil?" Ohhhhh, I guess things didn't go well. Too bad. Rolling Eyes smiley face

I was so hopeful that Glorfindel and Elrilya would finally be able to get together...only to have my hopes shot down when Elrilya made he declaration. *sigh*

Great chapters! I'm glad you're back and posting. Very Happy smiley face

Update soon.

Michelle...

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