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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 3:32 pm
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Oh my, this last chapter, Namarie, was simply beautiful and touching. The way you tell the story is so poetic and tender... you really know how to make the emotions flow with subtle choices of words. I love to read Eternal and I hope you update soon.
Great work!
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Wed Sep 14, 2005 5:06 pm
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The way you described Glorfindel's actions and emotions, during the battle, was absolutely wonderful. Very clear, very vivid imagery. Fantastic job! I can't wait to read the next chapter. 
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
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Sun Sep 18, 2005 4:30 pm
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| Finally they kissed! Woohooooooooo I loved the battle scene, Glorfindel is THE Elf! I could sense his power and courage and loneless in every strike of his sword and in his song. I was reading the NC-17 story and I got a little lost, because there are many parts that are different from this version. Both versions are great, but you know that I have a twisted mind, so the NC-17 is going to be my favorite Now let me catch up on my reading! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sun Sep 18, 2005 7:03 pm
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*JOY!!!*
Fantastic chapter, Trekqueen! Glorfindel's anxiousness and excitement when he arrived in Vinyamar was very evident and very sweet. I'm very happy that Elrilya and Glorfindel are finally making progress, and when he finally admitted how he felt, it definitely left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling all over. But...
Does that mean that we're nearing the end of this delightful tale? Say it isn't so! 
Please, please, please, say it isn't so. 
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
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Sun Sep 25, 2005 8:03 pm
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| See? There was nothing to be worried about this chapter. It was sweet and peaceful. It stands as an interlude for the things about to come in my opinion. Write more! I'm already looking forward to reading the next chapter of Eternal |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:57 pm
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I loved Turgon's reaction to Glorfindel's request. I guess Glorfindel hadn't hidden his feelings for Elrilya as well as he thought he had - no one seems to be shocked about their relationship.
I can't wait to find out whether they will be able to keep Turgon's secret. Will someone slip up, and let "the cat out of the bag?" I hope not! 
Great chapter. I love your updates. They never disappoint and are always so entertaining. Keep up the good work, and keep updating!
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Tue Oct 11, 2005 10:05 am
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Great chapter! I love seeing the progression of their relationship - they seem so at ease with one another. Too bad they're going to be seperated again; but at least they know where they stand with one another this time. Now, if only Echtelion could get his relationship squared away. *sigh*
I'm sorry to hear about your RL problems. Hopefully, you and your family will get through this with as little hurt as possible. Parents divorcing is never easy - no matter what age you are. I'll keep my fingers crossed that it all turns out well for you and yours.
I'm not going anywhere so when/if you decide to update, I'll still be here
Take care of yourself, and come back soon
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Sun Oct 30, 2005 6:52 pm
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I really enjoyed reading about how Elrilya wanted to make Glorfindel's day special. That she would go through so much trouble for him, really shows how much she cares about his happiness.
So Glorfindel finally decided to take the next step in his relationship with Elrilya....fantastic! I'm looking forward to seeing how they handle their upcoming seperation, now that they've become even closer.
Very nice! I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:11 am
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Loved this chapter! Very sensual and romantic. Very beautiful! Loved the visual descriptions of their clothes fro the party, very easy to picture in the mind. My question now is, Will she get to go with him when he leaves?
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
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Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:32 pm
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Elrilya's acceptance of their seperation was such a relief. I'm glad that she understood that there was nothing to be done, and that they would have to endure as best they could.
Glorfindel's hope for the future is promising. He seems to have settled in - taking care of the business that he was sent there to take care of. That he often thinks of Elrilya is very romantic. I can't wait for them to be reunited.
A wonderfully romantic and hopeful chapter! Great job!
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