Reviews for "Winter Fire"

Mon Jul 19, 2004 12:42 pm

Hail!
Wow...this was a very surprising story...I read it expecting a Faramir romance...and got Damrod instead! Not an unwelcome surprise....and very well done, so far! I eagerly await your next installment. Very Happy smiley face

I only have one word of criticism...you tend to slip into a Germanic format on some of your dialogue...not too upsetting, but a little distracting.
Wonderful story...(and an interesting twist on the time jumping...bravo!)
See you on the next installment!

Sun Sep 26, 2004 8:12 am

Wonderful story and I can't wait for the next chapter to see why Damrod is there standing in her doorway... hopefully to work things out with her somehow. I feel so bad for him. Nice interaction with the other "known" characters as well but it is cool the way you have taken a minor character and brought him to life like this. I hope that she gets to go back to Middle Earth somehow! Smile smiley face

It is very well done.

Mon Sep 27, 2004 7:53 am

I realize that you've already written the ending but if she doesn't get to go back to him at some point I'll be extremely upset. I'm in tears as it is.

Thu Oct 14, 2004 5:46 pm

This is an absolutely stunning piece of fiction! I was hooked by the first chapter and was very sad to be reading the last chapter. I do so hope that Damrod finds her somewhere in the sands of time.

Keep up the good work!! Smile smiley face

Sun Oct 24, 2004 11:45 am

I'm glad I didn't read this when it was a WIP and only found it now that it's completed.... I don't think I could have coped with not knowing the ending right away, I've been in tears as I've read it as it is. Bawl smiley face

A wonderful story thank you Bow smiley face

Sun Oct 24, 2004 1:18 pm

Thank you so much for a wonderful story. And an extra thanks for the happy ending.

Sun Oct 24, 2004 8:32 pm

At this point I'm pretty spreechless. What an amazing story!!! Wonderfully written, an d all.

Are you planning a sequel????

Sun Oct 24, 2004 10:07 pm

What a wonderful story!

Fri Oct 29, 2004 8:25 pm

Very well written and descriptive chapter. I really like your priest/friar in this chapter too. He seems very caring and understanding....a very peaceful type of character. Smile smiley face

Fri Oct 29, 2004 8:46 pm

Such a sweet story. I am so glad that they got to be together again, and I just loved the way that you wrote the last couple of chapters in the friars point of view. Very well done. This is going on my favorite's list.

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