Reviews for "You Can't Put Your Arms Around A Memory"

Sat Jul 10, 2004 5:40 pm

Erm... Nice try with the Scottish! Shocked smiley face

Punctuation is needing a check over but overall, not too bad, hen(s)! Wink smiley face

PS - If i ever say 'ye' like Merlyn does, shoot me deid Twisted Evil smiley face

Sun Jul 11, 2004 5:58 pm

I have read several AU fan fic's and didn't like them. They were just way off base for me. I have found 3 that I read that I really and truly enjoyed. 2 where finished and 1 I think the author has gone on to other things and left us hanging. I can now make the number 4. This is a great story and I hope it's updated soon!!! I look forward to reading this story!

Mon Jul 12, 2004 3:24 am

This is a flonquing awesome story. Really, there are very few genuinely (sp?) good stories out there...but this is one of them. You're on my watch list for certain, and I hope you update soon. Great job!

Sun Jul 25, 2004 11:59 pm

Okay Miss, when are you going to update this? I'm in need of a good read.

Mon Jul 26, 2004 4:57 pm

I'm truly enjoying this story! I can't wait until you update! I especially can't wait to see what happens with Merl and Haldir! That's an interesting pairing.

Thu Sep 02, 2004 2:15 pm

Very, very entertaining.... and just 'real' enough to get into! This story gives me hope, you know. And I love Mel and Stel, they aren't 'Mary-Sue's; each has their own problems to contend with, each their own demons to fight. And Elves in the modern world is priceless! That Orophin's first word in our language would be a curse word! I almost laughed myself silly over that one. And Mel wanting to pounce on Haldir as he parades around shirtless -- normal impulses there, girl. I am so with her on that one!

Now that is out of the way, let me say the writing is wonderful, the descriptions very well worded, and the language(s) very authentic. I love the way you have 'humanized' the Elves, making them actual people rather than the 'angels' so many perceive them to be.

Now, where is the next chapter? Come on, give over! Or I'm coming after you! Wink smiley face

Sun Sep 12, 2004 3:21 pm

Mmm...interesting. Please continue! Wink smiley face

Thu Sep 23, 2004 10:46 pm

Ohhh finally! I had given up hope on you gals! thank you for this wonderful chapter. It had everything! I love the plot turns as well. Now how is Thranduil going to deal with all this? Are he and Legolas close at all? WAs Rumil with them (I forget)? And jeeze, I am in love with Merlyn! As well as Stella! Alright, I do hope you continue with this, and SOON! Loving it, and lovin you girls!

Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:29 am

Well well well, isn't this interesting... Like the twist with the Eagle. I'm very curious where all this intrigue is going to end up.

Oh and the tension/teasing between Merlyn and Haldir is riviting! *vbg*

Thu Mar 10, 2005 2:12 pm

i cannot wait until the next chapter - you have me on the seat of my chair staring at the screen openmouthed!

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