Reviews for "You Can't Put Your Arms Around A Memory"

Wed Dec 28, 2005 12:46 am

Please tell me this is not done yet! Rolling Eyes smiley face

This is a good story for me. That would be something if elves were in that region still living there! I would take the first plane, train, bus,skateboard or kite and get out there! Hurry, cliffhanger is making me crazy!! Laughing smiley face

Sun Mar 19, 2006 8:47 pm

I think this is one is now officially part of my "greatest stories ever" list, and only 2 of them ar AU. I agree on the punctuation needing a check, and I might add some grammar (concerning verbs) but, that's a minor thing... I'm looking forward to the next post, please, please, please, let it be soon!!!!!!

Tue May 30, 2006 12:54 am

Where are you please don't drop the story it is great! Surprised smiley face

Thu Mar 29, 2007 2:36 pm

This is a very entertaining and funny story its such a shame it isnt finished but I have ran into may of these, I hope you will complete it sometime,after all if you have a story to tell why not tell it.

Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:35 am

I'm about half-way through this story (yeah - I know it's a bit late but better late than never Very Happy smiley face

) and felt I had to break off to leave a review. Whilst not a fan of Mary-Sue's and humans 'dropping' into ME, this particular story-line is rather compelling. However, I feel I must point out one, rather irksome point - the Scottish accent! Whilst your writing style flows very well and your descriptions are excellent, every time I read a passage of dialogue from our 'Scottish Lassie' it grates like nails on a blackboard. I'm truly sorry to mention this and it is possibly the only negative. Dialects are very difficult to get right unless you really have a feel for them.

OK....that said, I'm returning to read a bit more.

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Sun Oct 28, 2007 3:31 pm

PLEASE, PLEASE continue the story!

rashida7777~

Wed Feb 20, 2008 4:41 pm

This is one of the most real AU fics I've read. You make the elves seem real (for lack of a better word) But it's been what...three, four years since you've updated? YOU CAN'T STOP NOW!! UPDATE! PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEEEE!

Tue Feb 26, 2008 7:54 am

pleeeeaaaase....
I really like this story, are you going to leave it like this? NOOOOOOO

Thu May 01, 2008 1:09 pm

Any chance of finishing this fic? I'd love to see the rest of it...

Sat May 09, 2009 6:00 pm

This is a really great story. i hope you will write more.

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