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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
Mon Jul 12, 2004 10:45 am
Very interesting! I can't wait to read more.
 
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Mon Jul 12, 2004 3:05 pm
Sivan,

You have made big grammar errors in your summary and it makes this fic look bad! Its only when i read the chapter that i realised you have an excellent grasp of tense and grammar! Still, the first impression was negative so you may want to edit the summary quick!! Very Happy smiley face
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Tue Jul 13, 2004 10:39 am
Hm, you must have edited your summary, because it looked fine to me. I don't read fics whose summaries are all messed up, doesn't bode well for the fics. lol

I loved this and was also kinda horrified by it too. You're gonna kill off Legolas, aren't you? Please post more soon?
 
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Tue Jul 13, 2004 11:51 am
I see you edited the summary - looks fine now. BTW - i know its just shorter but its actually really foreboding and interesting! Very Happy smiley face Im glad I moaned at you! Twisted Evil smiley face

Looking forward to chapter 2. Hope you dont murderise poor Leggy! What would Gimli do? Shocked smiley face
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Mon Aug 09, 2004 11:35 am
More than barely a cliffie, since in the movie Legolas WAS right there when Boromir died. Please come back and post more, SOON!?!?
 
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glitteringrainclouds
Joined: 17 Jul 2004
Reviews: 33
Location: uk
Tue Aug 10, 2004 9:34 am
HI there, i have read about three of your fics, and i have noticed that leggy seems to get hurt a lot. Noth that i am complaining as all of the situations are different and full of tension....and great. And i agree with Duchess that is a huge cliffie !! post more soon Very Happy smiley face pweeeaase
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Wed Sep 22, 2004 5:07 am
It does not bode well that Legolas looked at Gimli that way, nor that he is referring to Aragorn as "the man" in his own mind. What's up? Memory loss? Rats!
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Sun Nov 07, 2004 6:33 pm
Thank you for the revision. Smile smiley face Not sure I cared for the way the other one was going.
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Thu Nov 25, 2004 9:32 am
What's that? He can't hear them? *puzzled* Whyever not? *completely confused*

Well I guess that's better than memory loss, but... *sigh* Legolas really NEEDS to be able to hear in this situation! *worried now*

More please? Smile smiley faceSmile smiley faceSmile smiley face
 
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