Reviews for "Fly, O Man"

Mon Jul 12, 2004 3:31 pm

Amazing! Captivating and enchanting, it's a great poem. Short and steady, a magnificent gem in this archive! Very Happy smiley face

Wed Jul 14, 2004 9:51 am

Cadi, this is getting kind of boring Very Happy smiley face

-- I must repeat myself in saying "Beautiful!"

Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:46 pm

Had me worried there for a minute, Astara Wink smiley face

Fri Oct 01, 2004 6:01 am

I did not get it. Of course, I got to it from the home page, as a featured story. But even with the description, nope. Sorry, just not a fan of Denethor. It was poetic, and well written, if a little off rhythm at times. I guess not knowing who it was about threw me. Maybe a short description with the poem itself will help. But, thank you for sharing.

Fri Oct 01, 2004 7:19 pm

There isn't really anything here which points *clearly* to Denethor. At first I thought you were describing a Nazgul at the end of the war. Some of the lines do not scan particularly well--"rather" really breaks that line. "But" might have been a better choice.

But the emotional impact is good, and the imagery of the cut wings striking. Right now it's a near-miss; some slight editing & it's a hit. Smile smiley face

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "Fly, O Man"