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LadySolaris
Joined: 31 May 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Traverse City, Michigan
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Tue Jul 13, 2004 11:45 am
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OMG!
I absolutely love this story! This is the best 10th walker story I have ever read. I especially love how the main character acts like a normal person. The main character is developed very well and has her own believeable personality.
Please please please update soon! This is one of my fav. stories!!!
~LadySolaris
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kalia
Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 4
Location: Switzerland
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Tue Jul 13, 2004 5:48 pm
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Oh my... What a great story! It isn't often that one sees an OC that is so well developed and interacts so smoothly with the canon characters. Ai, my english just isn't good enough to give your story the praise it definitely deserves*sighs*
Please update soon!!
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Amlee
Joined: 06 Jul 2004
Reviews: 18
Location: Alabama
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Tue Jul 13, 2004 9:12 pm
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| I usually stay away from the "fallen into middle earth" stories. Matter of fact this is the first one that I have set down and read. I must say I am very impressed!! What a great story! I am very much enjoying this story. Your OC works wonderfully into the storyline with the other characters. Please update soon!! |
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Radbooks
Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
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Sat Jul 17, 2004 6:03 pm
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I just read the first chapter and I wanted to let you know that it seems very well written and I will be going on and reading more. It captured my interest right away because it was such an unsual way for the fellowship to meet up with a new person. I had just been thinking recently - "why do these girls always fall right near Rivendell?" So this story definitely caught my attention! Anyway, I will read more of your story and will review again soon!
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Radbooks
Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
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Sun Jul 18, 2004 10:53 am
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Ha! I did that first review after the first chapter and then thought well I'll read a few more and review again. But I couldn't stop reading to do that!!!!!!! It is so good, so well written, I had to keep reading last night until the end of what you had written. I was up until 2:00 or something reading this!  It was worth every minute of it too! I can't wait for more of this story. Very well done! |
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ketpaws
Joined: 24 Jul 2003
Reviews: 2
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Sun Jul 18, 2004 10:58 am
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Hey great story so far! I like how you focus on all the characters and not just your OC it strays from the typical *shit I've just been dumped on a field in Rohan in my pajamas, how the heck did i get here* sort of staory*although I like those to hehehe* please please don't let this story go...I have read and started way too many stories that have been forgotten or are just updated like every two months and they are killers! Keep up the good work and please update soon!
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Vendie
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Sun Jul 18, 2004 8:44 pm
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I have to admit, when I first saw the summary for this story I was rather skeptical, but you have such a command of the language that it made the tenth-walker-plot easy to swallow. You did a wonderful job making sure that you got all of the characters covered and you took an omniscient point of view rather than a third person with your OC as the main character. I enjoy reading what everyone's thinking.
Though, you may want to check over a few technical things in the story, such as Galadriel giving Frodo the light of Earendil - not Elendil. And one grammar thing that I noticed was that you used numbers rather than writing them out (ie, 22 instead of twenty-two).
Otherwise, the story was great. Especially the scenes between Legolas and Kaitlyn. I felt like I was going to melt. You're doing a great job! I can't wait to read more. Keep it up! |
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fairyfaye
Joined: 12 Jul 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Arizona
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Thu Jul 22, 2004 11:12 am
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I tend to be wary of stories that mix our reality with the LOTR world as well, but I do like 10th walker stories, especially with OFC that get involved with Legolas. Tolkien gives us just enough on him to make us want more, and you've done a good job characterizing him, much as I have imagined him myself. And this is a good enough story to suspend my usual disbelief. I'm glad you challenged yourself.
But alas, where is the content worthy of the NC-17 rating? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I really can't wait to see where this is going. |
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LocaPixie
Joined: 30 Jul 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Belgium
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Fri Jul 30, 2004 11:00 am
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Hay! Just wanted to say that I really love this story. I hope you'll update soon
O, I also wanted to say that Kaitlyn is a very realistic character (she's really grown on me )
~Loca |
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aragorndreamer
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 24
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Mon Aug 02, 2004 11:35 am
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Oh My! I started reading this story and could not stop. I love the way you are writing about the romance between Legolas and Kaitlyn. The way you've taken the time for the charaters to fall for one another. I can hardly wait until they kiss and hopefully some smutt, LOL. I hope you will update soon. I feel like I'll be left in limbo until then.
Thanks for sharing your story. |
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