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Amlee
Joined: 06 Jul 2004
Reviews: 18
Location: Alabama
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Sun Aug 08, 2004 8:44 pm
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YAY! You updated!! Sorry to hear about your horse. I hope all is well! 2 - 3 weeks?? *sitting on pins and needles* Love the action between Legolas and Kaitlyn! Can't wait for it to heat up more.  Also the way you show the softer side of Gimli. As for the next chapter I have my tissue ready for Haldir's death. *sobs* |
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Vendie
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Mon Aug 09, 2004 12:19 am
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Ah! Finally, an update! I can't wait to read more - but if I have to, I will!  |
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draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004
Reviews: 41
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Mon Aug 09, 2004 1:03 am
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| I'm so glad she's doing better. It's ok that you haven't updated right away. Well, if you're next update is in 2-3 weeks, that will just make reading the next chapter more worth while. A lot has definitely happened in this chapter. I must also say that I'm very proud of Kaitlyn and how she's grown. And the relationship between her and Legolas is definitely taking a turn; it's more intense. Although I must admit that I'm a little anxious in regards to how everyone will react to Haldir's death. He and Kaitlyn seemed to be pretty good friends, especially in the small time they've known each other. I'm also curious to find out why Eowyn was so upset with Kaitlyn and Legolas. Jealousy perhaps?? I know she was upset with Aragorn for obvious reasons. I shall patiently await your next chapter. |
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aragorndreamer
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 24
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 11:07 am
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| I was glad to see that you updated your story. I am enjoying it very much. I will continue to check for your updates and can hardly wait for them to finally kiss. |
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
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Fri Aug 13, 2004 1:11 pm
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| I have to admit that this is one of the best 10th person story that I've read. |
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kaitlin11
Joined: 04 Jul 2004
Reviews: 1
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Thu Aug 19, 2004 2:27 pm
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OMG... this is such a great story. I usually don't read the whole 'person from our world in middle earth' theme, but I really love this story. Kaitlyn has really grown on me. I can't wait till Legolas and Kaitlyn kiss, (and maybe a little more 
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!!
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ancksunamun668
Joined: 08 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Wed Sep 01, 2004 3:02 pm
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| Typicallly I don't like stories that have people from the 21st century as characters but this one is different - I really really really love this story - keep up the writing and update soon! |
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draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004
Reviews: 41
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Wed Sep 08, 2004 1:33 am
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| I forgive you!!! I understand how life can get. I must say that I am very proud of Kaitlyn for saving Aragorn like she did, but at the same time, she stupidly put herself at risk. I know she will survive, or the story will end much too soon, but no doubt Legolas and Gimli will be very angry with her. |
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ancksunamun668
Joined: 08 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Wed Sep 08, 2004 3:37 pm
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AHHHHH CLIFFIE!!!! Aww I hate cliffhangers, but they certainly do the trick don't they? I certainly understand about the time it takes to update - I'm in very much the same boat as you - been there - I just look at it this way, the more time you have, the better the chapter will be!
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Jomitsui
Joined: 24 Dec 2003
Reviews: 29
Location: Singapore
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Thu Sep 09, 2004 7:58 pm
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Wow.... as most has said in the forum, I'm the one that had read ur prologue and skip the whole story as there are too many OCs dropping into Middle earth thingy in the fanfiction that suck big time (exception of 'The Empty Vessel'). But since u promoted urself as well as the comments are all wonderful, I decided to give it a try...as I like Legoromace.
Anyway, once I finished chapter one I'm glad that I did not miss this story. Wow... ... now wait a min, that Kaitlyn is not one of those many that goes swooning over legolas immediately she sees him. More importantly, her character is very much alive. Nice.
The angst of Boromir is nicely written too...sigh... 
K, since I had read 13 chapters of the story now, I thought I should let u know that there is one more who like ur story and hope ur story and hope it will continue to develop. Thanks for the self-promo, I think more authors should do this. 
Wait! I forgot to say that I've managed to learn some elvish from ur story too! Wow...urs is the only one that really teaches elvish! U go girl! |
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