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Jomitsui
Joined: 24 Dec 2003 Reviews: 29
Location: Singapore
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Sat Sep 11, 2004 2:40 pm
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I finished all the posted chapters! Wow... just can't stop reading!
When r u goin to post the next? Dying to see Legolas reaction after he knew wat happen to her. |
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004 Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Sun Sep 12, 2004 12:18 pm
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GAH! You're horrible. Great chapter. I can't wait to read more - hope to see the next chapter sometime in the near future! |
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pib2cheeks
Joined: 19 Jul 2004 Reviews: 23
Location: Ohio
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Tue Sep 21, 2004 11:20 pm
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OMG! I can't believe you left it to hang like that. Great chapter by the way Please update soon. |
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draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004 Reviews: 41
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Wed Sep 22, 2004 11:40 am
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| I'm glad Legolas was able to get to Kaitlyn. I'm also glad he's realized that he's in love with her. Hopefully her fever will break soon enough. I'm anxious to know what's going to happen next now that Legolas sees the truth of how he feels. We all know Kaitlyn loves him already, but she hasn't been able to say anything. Maybe now she'll get her chance. I still love this story, and this chapter was another amazing one. |
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004 Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:09 pm
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You have me sitting on the absolute edge of my chair with this last chapter. I love this story, I can't wait to see what happens next! But if I have to, I understand . RL can be horribly hectic *glances at the large pile of homework to her right* Heh....
Thanks for writing such a good story! You're truly talented at taking this cliched mary-sue-ish plot and giving it a believable and quite wonderful twist!  |
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unplugged32
Joined: 04 Oct 2004 Reviews: 1
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Mon Oct 04, 2004 3:05 am
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Cormak, I've just read the latest chapter and it's brilliant! Lots of angst, well written. More please???
-Chris |
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pib2cheeks
Joined: 19 Jul 2004 Reviews: 23
Location: Ohio
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Mon Oct 11, 2004 9:12 am
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Great chapter! I love how legolas described his feelings for Kaitlyn. Update soon, please?  |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Mon Oct 11, 2004 8:28 pm
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Hi,
I'm so sorry I've never reviewed this story, I thought I had, but apparently I was wrong. I'll remedy that now. I've been reading this story for a while now, and I absolutely love everything about your story. You've created a great emotional foundation for each of the characters that you've developed. The relationships that Kaitlyn has with her new family is so believable and so touching.
Your latest chapter was an absolute emotional rollercoaster for me. And I still don't know Kaitlyn's fate! ***sighs*** Legolas's realization of his feeling was so moving. And his conversation with Aragorn REALLY had me in tears...I'm not ashamed to admit it! I'm really nervous about finding out what is going to happen with Kaitlyn. When/If she wakes up, what will happen between Kaitlyn and Legolas? And was her destiny or her "fate" to save Aragorn or is there more? Will she be sent home now that her destiny has been fulfilled? So many questions, so many questions...
As far as waiting for updates is concerned...I don't mind waiting. I know that when you finally post, that the chapter will be quality work...entertaining, enchanting...amazing! Keep up the good work, I'll be looking out for your next update.
Michelle... |
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draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004 Reviews: 41
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Mon Oct 11, 2004 9:46 pm
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| I'm simply amazed at how deeply Legolas is feeling. I know Aragorn is concerned, but I don't understand why he was questioning Legolas as he was. I know that if Gimli and Legolas had the same conversation, the questioning wouldn't have happened. Gimli would be more apt to threatening Legolas' life if Kaitlyn was ever hurt by him. But I guess it's the whole relationship with Aragorn and Arwen that spurred it on. Hopefully Kaitlyn will recover soon. I'm curious to know how Legolas will tell her of his feelings. I hope he doesn't wait too long. |
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nelygirl
Joined: 04 Oct 2004 Reviews: 5
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Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:46 am
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wow I have to say through this whole story i was hooked and even felt all the emotions that welyn re passed through legolas and kaitlyn i cant believe he's in love with her and that he realized it...this by far is the best story about legolas i have read in all its entirety, keep up the work and dedication... I tip my hat to u!!
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