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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Tue Jul 13, 2004 1:34 pm
Amazing! Well done and original as an idea! The poem was lovely - I loved the rhymes - they didn't seem forced at all! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:35 pm
I enjoyed the unusual point of view and the commanding tone of the poem. And granted, I'm no expert on poetry here, but I thought some of the grammatical, usage, and punctuation choices were confusing. Why did some sentences get end punctuation and some did not? Was the substitution of "bain" (a bath) for "bane" (a cause of harm, ruin, or death) intentional? I know that sometimes poets substitute words to make a point, but I didn't understand that one. In the end, I felt like I just wasn't getting your subtler meanings, and that could very well just be my fault.
 
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Alphia
Joined: 13 Jul 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Minnesota
Tue Jul 13, 2004 7:22 pm
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