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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Thu Aug 05, 2004 8:26 pm
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Aww, I hope you feel better soon. I've never broken my wrist before, but I imagine that it would be quite a handicap. And hurt too! Take care of yourself, and get well soon.  |
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ladytinewen
Joined: 13 Apr 2004
Reviews: 15
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 9:57 am
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| Excellent chapter. I really don't like that Willa, perhaps she should get some comeuppance? I’m so sorry to hear about your wrist I hope it heals soon. |
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Ania
Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 3:21 pm
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| Lovely chapter! It WAS rather infuriating when Eomer and Ani...hmph...oh well, I like the interweaving of the Willa plot, many possibilities arising here...very well written as always. You captured Ani's frustration perfectly, brilliantly written as always Novedhelion! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Tue Aug 10, 2004 4:44 pm
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Grrr, that dag on Willa! I knew she'd be trouble, somehow! I just knew it!
And poor Ani, still frustrated... 
I'm so happy that the first chapter has finally arrived. I love this continuing saga, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Great chapter, update soon!
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Tisbe52
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 4
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Thu Aug 12, 2004 3:15 pm
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Yea!! Ani and Eomer are back. Great way to start the story Nove. Although what a mean thing to do to poor Ani. I can't wait until they finally get to it!
Hope your broken wrist doesn't slow your writing down too much. |
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Kementari1
Joined: 23 Jan 2004
Reviews: 7
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Mon Aug 16, 2004 1:07 am
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Oh my my my that was LOVELY! You do know how to write sexual tension, m'dear...in fact, you know how to write EVERYTHING and ANYTHING!!!  I know it's good when I'm completely carried away by your writing, hoping the chapter will go on forever, then I look over at the bar on the right and see that I'm almost done and inwardly groan...
I'm blowing mommy kisses to your wrist, dear Bard -- I wish you a speedy recovery and a speedy next chapter!!!
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:43 am
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I hope the wrist is getting better, Nove! Healing vibes!
My, that Willa is quite the bad penny, isn't she? I hope she finally gets a clue soon, otherwise I expect she'll turn up again and cause more trouble. The man-to-man conversation between Amrothos and Eomer was great! I'm glad Amrothos knows the depth of Eomer's devotion to Ani, if he ever had any doubt, and knows the story behind Willa's pursuit of Eomer.
Gaah! No one has imploded due to sexual frustration yet? I'm surprised! Of course with their luck the weather is _not_ holding. I hope Eomer really makes up for lost time when they get to Edoras. _I'm_ about ready to implode at this point, on their behalf. I just know their going to be splendid together once "it" happens!
I loved the stunned reactions of Cam and Eowyn once they realized that the newlyweds have been obstaining all this time! Hee! But surely they can find some mutual satisfaction without completely breaking Eomer's word? I'm sure they can get creative! 
I'm looking forward to seeing these two get some relief- hopefully sooner rather than later!
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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gariotin
Joined: 07 Jun 2003
Reviews: 27
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Fri Aug 20, 2004 9:40 pm
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| Please - give us some resolution. Ani is not the only one who has been waiting! Nice to see these characters continuing their saga. |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
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Sat Aug 21, 2004 10:15 pm
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Well, this chapter was short, but a good one. Sometimes, while I was reading, I had the feeling that there was something missing, but I got to the conclusion that I was used to longer chapters, so I was missing a little more pages hee hee At least they finally got married! 
The wedding ceremony was simple, but it held the spirit of the Rohirrim people whose hearts are made of strength and fierce loyalty, both represented in the swords Ani and Éomer exchanged. Of course you didn't forget to remind us how sexy Éomer is and gave us that wonderful kiss scene. 
I was looking forward to seeing the vows in Rohirric. In fact, I had expected to see more lines than you showed us, but it was great anyway. By the way, what do those words mean, Nove? I am curious 
And there is Willa... you gave us a good hint of what she may become, the great villain of TTH bok two. Would she be as bad as Mardil? Tchan raaamm
Now that Éomer and Ani are married, I expect to see some action waiting for them in the next chapter! I'm already on the edge of my chair, counting the minutes hee hee 
Beijos!
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ancksunamun668
Joined: 08 Jun 2004
Reviews: 17
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Sat Aug 21, 2004 10:59 pm
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Ohhhh suspenseful and intriguing last words, huh? Can't wait til the next chapter is uploaded - hope your wrist gets better - Willa IS ' '! Update soon! |
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