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Ania
Joined: 08 Sep 2003
Reviews: 55
Location: Britain
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Mon Sep 06, 2004 9:33 am
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| heehee, nice little bit at the end there! don't know how you did it Novedhelion, you made it intimate and yet subtle at the same time?! That was an incredible bit of writing, and the capture of emotion was exquisite, the frustration created the pefect level of tension to get the reader just as frustrated as Eomer and Anhuil! VERY well done. |
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Auli
Joined: 30 Jun 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: London
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Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:17 pm
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After chapters upon chapters of the building up of suspense, you've finally posted up Éomer and Ani's 'proper' wedding night. ^_^ It's brilliant. The last line had me laughin out loud.
I **really** can't wait till you post up the next chapter!  Hope it will be soon. |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Thu Sep 09, 2004 12:03 pm
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Yay!! I'm glad the wedding night not only lived up to, but surpassed the husband-and-wife expecations! You managed to make it very very sexy without being explicit, leaving it up to dirty imaginations like mine to fill in the blanks- hee!
"Ata", huh? Is she going to be able to sit down comfortably tomorrow? Not likely. At least she'll be very happy! They'll probably both be dazed and tired and very likely sore. I hope they get lots of teasing from all when they emerge from their bedroom.
I'm very glad they're both "properly" married! What is life going to be like for Ani now that she's Queen _and_ wife to Eomer? This could be an interesting adjustment period.
I'm glad you're continuing this story.
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Fri Sep 10, 2004 6:45 am
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| yay, very sweet and enjoyable, can't wait for more. |
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lucylambchops
Joined: 11 Sep 2004
Reviews: 8
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Sat Sep 11, 2004 8:10 am
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Where is the battles, the fighting? I like them...I miss them. Other then that, it's alllll good. Thanks for writing!  |
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Auli
Joined: 30 Jun 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: London
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Wed Sep 22, 2004 12:17 pm
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Awww, that myth/legend about the sea-faeries was so sweet. And who cares if it's basis was 'blatantly stolen from celtic mythology' as you put it? Tolkien took loads of parts from various legends to incorporate into his stories and we all love them . Your interpretation of Dol Amrothian culture makes your fic seem even more realistic & it really adds depth to your writting.
I luved the fluff [the more the better, methinks ] & I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it'll be up soon. |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:35 am
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Lovely little vignette. I like your inclusion of the selkie legend- it makes sense that Belafalas would have one, too! I don't think I'd mind being woken up by Eomer, either  .
I hope we will be treated to some more sweet Eomer/Lothiriel soon!
How long after they were married did Elfwine come along? I can't remember. I wonder if you'll be dealing with that eventually.
Wonderful as always!
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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23layla
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
Reviews: 1
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Sun Oct 03, 2004 8:25 pm
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I must say that I recently started reading part 1 of this story and I fell in love with it. I was so happy to know that you continued the story, and I read the few chapters you posted in part 2, and they're absolutely brilliant. Please continue writing, I'm so excited to see what you have in store for the characters.
great writing!
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ladytinewen
Joined: 13 Apr 2004
Reviews: 15
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Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:11 am
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 Happy dance, you updated! that Willa is such a bitch! but i'm glad you've given Ani another friend in Isolde. I just hope she proves to be as useful and loyal a friend as Cam! please update soon. |
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amybethm
Joined: 28 Feb 2004
Reviews: 34
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Tue Oct 12, 2004 4:37 pm
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I'm usually sympathetic to women who end up in this situation, but something tells me that Willa is lying her ass off, and may not even be pregnant. If she is, I hope it's obvious onc the child is born that it isn't Eomer's (I _am_ assuming that he is telling the truth, given her track record in particular). If she isn't, I hope everyone finds out pronto before Eomer's and Ani's repuations suffer too much. I wouldn't shed too many tears for Willa if she was burned at the stake at this point- sheesh! Shame shame shame on her for putting good people through the ringer for her pride and advancement! Can you tell this chapter really irked me?
Eomer did all that he could as a decent man, and I'm glad he and Ani are standing together- and I really like Isolde so far. I hope she and Ani forge a great friendship as there is great potential for that.
I hope we won't have to wait too long for the continuation or to see Willa (please please) get her comeuppance!
Cheers,
Amy B. |
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