Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
Sun Jul 18, 2004 4:18 pm
Technically this is a lovely poem, but I am uncertain as to how it relates to LOTR or the Silm. Could you perhaps give the reader some more detail as to how it fits into the Tolkienverse? I think that would help the reader to better appreciate your writing.
Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sun Jul 18, 2004 9:13 pm
Beautiful! Well done! Enchanting and wonderful, a touching poem! Almost made me cry!
sindohte
Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
Sun Jul 18, 2004 10:05 pm
Saw the poem's backstory on the story index page and now understand how and where it fits. Cool.
Vendie
Joined: 01 May 2004 Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA