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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Mon Jun 20, 2005 3:53 pm
I loved this story because Celeborn wasn't portrayed as a wimp, jealous, whiny, or snippy. I frequently do not like the way these two are written but I liked this alot. Very Happy smiley face
 
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Alatariel

Joined: 27 Nov 2005
Reviews: 3
Location: wearing raincoats, standing solo, in the sun
Wed Dec 14, 2005 3:01 am
As you said, it is unfortunate that few attempt to tackle Galadriel and Celeborn, but I'm glad you did. I love the opeing "...a place of whispered words." And your portrayal of Celeborn is spot on in my mind. I would have to agree with Inglor: of the few stories I have read, they seem to often portray him as jealous or weak. I always view him as an elf with extreme patience and understanding, and, above all, wisdom. The description of Celeborn being able to withstand the stares of Galadriel's eyes I think gets that message across in your writing. Oh, and nenya - definitely liked that plot device! Great job!
 
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